ZOMG! YES! lol... ah... this was great... i feel so happy now! i almost died! xD

but seriously... real chapters, plz? not being mad.. just.. i got really exited when i saw this updated... and then a parody chapter(as funny as it was) kinda made me grr-ish. ^^'

lol! I was totally serious and into this chapter until about halfway down XD

I'm really excited about the updates coming back. I was missing this fanfic!

THANK YOU! I love this story so much. Except you're making me kinda guilty, cause I haven't updated my story in a while, but between school and some writer's block,I can't get motivated...I always find the middle of the story the hardest part to write. (-_-)

I'm excited to read the next chapter!

yay! i cant wait! i love this story, its so cute with a wonderful plot! regular updates, ne? Au revior, until next time! :)

Lol, halfway through the chapter I was like 'wtf is this' XD
Well, this got me back into the story though... somehow.

i was really confused at first when you broke the 4th wall

This update filled me with joy. :D

I can't review on Ch 11, cuz I've already reviewed it >:(
But this made me laugh:
“Then the winter of 1903 was-“

“A cheap ploy to keep people reading.” Hughes replied, shaking his head and gesturing wildly. “You’ve seen her profile. We could almost make a drinking game out of how many stories she’s finished. Take a shot for every story that hasn’t been updated in at least a month! Take two for how many she’ll probably never finish!”

Hahahaha!! Don't be so hard on Arktos, Hughes! She doing her best!
I'm so glad to see that you're back! *happy dance!*

omg. Arktos.

:D I'm really glad to hear that you're going to be continuing this story. I've been checking back to see if there's been updates so this is really exciting. ^^

Good luck with everything... Sounds like you've had a rough time of stuff but again, it's really good to hear from you and that you're getting back into writing. <3 take care~

ZOMG, you updated =D

Loved the parody and can't wait until the real update =D

I really am enjoying this! Great story and I can't wait for an update! I know that you're probably really busy and stuff so I won't bother you about it.

Anyway, I haven't read many FMA fics but this is by far the most extensive, detailed, and all around well-written FMA story! You seem to have done your homework and I admire that in an author because homework for stories can take a freakin' huge amount of time. I also like how this is Parental!Roy instead of a romance make-out session between the two. -shudder- There are too many of those stories.

great chapter!

please review! i swear i am having with-drawal symptoms! I read this in the summer and i favourited it. i was looking over my favourites and i re-read this and fell in love with it all over again!. I dont think i reviewed the first time round - cant find it - whihc is wierd cuz i always review stories that deserve them, and yours obviously does!i cant wait to see hwere you take it!

Holy cow, the story gets better and better with each chapter. I love how you used some of Hiromu Arakawa's sources for names for the different people. Amazing, just amazing!

You captured Ed and Roy's personalities and reactions perfectly! Awesome job!