i'm loving this. more?young Soi Fon is soo adorable.

Amara

Ahh, Great! It's been quite a long time since I've read such a good fanfic; the grammar, the spelling... Just love it! Please update soon!

Great Start to a interesting YoruSoi fic! I can't wait to see what's next. Other than that, I can't really find anything to actually review. Well written, proper grammar and spelling, everything flows, and it was enjoyable; which is much better than what I can say for ALOT of other fics out there.
Keep it up!

Very interesting I like the way this story is starting off, I look forward to you continuing it.