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| rindy713 2008-06-14 ch 1,  | abusethis one makes me sad. i am not totally sure what he's seeing. i'm guessing he's haunted by his mother's death and his family troubles, and that's all way worse than what happened to him at tates. very deep! |
| The Confused One 2008-01-01 ch 1, | abuseAww. So sad. Beautiful and sad. Poor Bobby. That's just terrible. I want to hug him. Poor baby. I can see those as his nightmares. Makes perfect sense to me. :) Great work. Fabulous work. |
| subrosa 2007-12-31 ch 1, anon. | abuseSounds like potential.PLEASE write a Nicole story that covers all sides of this multi-dimenscional character relationship! |
| One Of The Fallen 2007-12-15 ch 1, | abuseYOU'VE HAD TIME TO POST THIS?!AND YOU HAVEN'T UPDATED 'ON PRIVET DRIVE IN 6 MONTHS?!UPDATE! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! |
| Z. E. Grockle 2007-12-10 ch 1, | abuseI like it! |
| deathstormweazel 2007-12-09 ch 1, | abuseVery deep, I really like it, the way you have written and composed this. To write something this deep is a hard thing to make ones self do. Congratulations I'd say you have done a very nice job. Keep up the fantastic work. :) |
| charlieboy 2007-12-09 ch 1, anon. | abuseThis is good! Are 'her eyes, dark and still in the calm of some storm', his mother? |