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| roudyredd 2008-03-23 ch 14,  | abuseTOTALLY AWESOME! Absolutely loved it. so glad you didn't kill Balto. Tina was really brave. Awesome story. Keep up the good work. |
| Elita1Angel 2008-03-13 ch 14, | abuseGreat chapter. Awesome Story, Kendell. ^_^ |
| Elita1Angel 2008-03-13 ch 13, | abuseGlad Jenna remembered the Northern Lights! ^_^ Good chapter. |
| Elita1Angel 2008-03-13 ch 12, | abuseGood chapter. Felt sorry for Balot. :( |
| Fan Boy 101 2008-03-13 ch 14, | abuseWow! Awesome story! I liked alot! I sure hope you write another Balto fic. Nice work! |
| Keyblade Master of Promise 2008-03-13 ch 14, | abuseAh, it's so nice to read a happy ending, lol. This was awsome, and there was a nice display of emotion when Balto almost kicked the bucket, you are a marvelous writer and really shine in fight scenes, as well as emotional ones, and sometimes those are hard to portray. You have a wonderful talent :D. Now, I have a sneaky feeling, like HyperSonicFire15, that Outsider isn't finished just yet...but that could be just us, lol. Fantastic job all around, ~KBMP |
| Cyber Spartan 2008-03-12 ch 14, | abusepretty cool, sorry I didn't review last chapter, it was nice too, hope you make a sequel |
| HyperSonicFire15 2008-03-12 ch 14, | abuseAlright!! You finished it! X3 Outsider's head go a'splody. LOL I can just picture the look on Steele's face. One thing though, Tina should have known he wasn't dead, cause if he had been, she would have disappeared, right?? XD Alex thinks he's funny, doesn't he?? XD ttyl Jennie |
| Fan Boy 101 2008-03-07 ch 13, | abuseNice one! Steele is starting to get on my nerves. I hope he knows what's good for him to not mess with Balto when he and Tina bring down the Outsider. Looking foward to the next chapter as always. |
| Keyblade Master of Promise 2008-03-06 ch 12, | abuseI am so sorry about not reviewing...I really meant to drop by, but I've been so busy as of late. This is very interresting...man, I feel sorry for Balto, getting beaten to a pulp by the Outsider, then Steele comes in and makes things worse XP! Well, guess I'll have to wait and see what they have planned for the Outsider. Nice chapters, ~KBMP |
| Fan Boy 101 2008-02-29 ch 12, | abuseNice! Can't wait for the final battle to begin. Please update soon. |
| Elita1Angel 2008-02-21 ch 11, | abuseGreat chapter. Now they all know it can talk which is gonna be interesting when they all are in the final battle. ^_^ |
| Cyber Spartan 2008-02-20 ch 11, | abusecool chapter, by the way I updated War of the Monsters |
| Fan Boy 101 2008-02-20 ch 11, | abuseOh boy! Just when things seem to not get any worse... Nice one on Steele. I sure hope Balto comes up with a good plan to take out the Outsider. Please update soon. |
| Keyblade Master of Promise 2008-02-15 ch 10, | abuseWow, impressively written fight scene, I like your style, very nicely done :D. If I haven't said this already, I believe you have a very good story in the making, lol. WHAT, the Outsider can speak?!? XP It's smarter than it looks (and smells), lol. ~KBMP |