dude, discontinue? teh end is nigh XD ah dude nice job -clap clap-

Well, well, soldier...

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WTF, man?!
You're quitting this thing?! WHY?! It's abso-freakin'-lutely AW3SOME!
Seriously, you MUST reconsider! Come to your senses, son!
I wanna see things go BOOM!
I want HAWT! lesbian action!
I want a goddamn FOURSOME!

LOL
LMAO
ROFL

(Sigh)
Anyway.
Helluva job, marine. And if you're givin' up on this thing, then, has someone decided to continue it? I'd really like to know.
Hey, I was wonderin' if ya could check out and review my DoA fic, "Love on New Zack Island"? I'd really appreciate it.

So, I hope you reconsider and continue this.

Semper-Fi! Carry on!

too bad you decided to discontinue! you can change the 3rd chapter if you want, there's no sex before it... anyway, i would love to continue it but i suck... so i humbly request you to reconsider your decision! i really enjoyed the story! c'mon, motivate yourself!

I am really surprised that you have so few reviews, you deserve more! Anyway, I'll be impatiently waiting for your updates & i just hope you don't kill any of the good/innocent people, had too much of that lately!:P Yeah, and i would like a little more build up rather than sex (but that is good too)! Honestly, i liked the first 2 chapters more than the 3rd one!

Alright, I don't know if the gratuitous sex and nudity is the best part of annoying, I woulnd't mind if there was some more story in your fanfic, sex is nice but "first sex-then sex-and later sex" gets a little old after a while.
No need to care about my opinion though, your story made me smile :D

that was helluh good but can ya check out my storys there D.O.A. dirty dancing rate M and Hitomi's assassination tell me if there good