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| 321 2008-05-25 ch 6, anon. | abuseaw, how cute! the part with the dressing up was confusing though. was putting makeup on roxas all that larxene did? or did she actually dress him up cutely or something? anyways, this story's amazing, and i really like the idea of it, so please keep it up! awesome job! :D |
| RoraShigoto 2008-02-12 ch 6,  | abuseI have made a discovery! First and foremost, this doesn't have much to do with this chapter. However, I made a discovery that when you update, you update like... a lot! A lot, a lot! It's cool and all, but I'm just now getting around to read all this awesomeness! lol Anyways, back to the point. And yes, I have a point. What point you ask? This one: this chapter was ** extraordinary! I loved it! Keep it up!! |
| The Critic Zoa 2008-02-11 ch 6, | abuseYou know... This is almost depressing. The way Roxas has to seduce Axel-on-crack... Hmpf. The 'seducing' would be easier if Axel was sane... This happens once a month?! Go ahead and give the guy a period why don't you. Once a year I can get, but once a month? I'm surprised Axel's survived this long. I like the way you put sane memories in the story, to show us what Axel is supposed to be like. I especially like the last one. It shows: 1. Axel is NOT fireproof. 2. How much of himself Axel hides from Roxas. Aww. Axel is/was a romantic! You're doing great. Please work on getting the next chapter out. ~The Critic, Zoa |
| Serzie 2008-02-09 ch 6, | abuseawesome chapter! |
| RoraShigoto 2008-01-06 ch 5, | abuse. . .want to know something? ...I'll tell ya anyways. I love this! It makes me wanna go write a very fluffy and/or schmexy akuroku one-shot! Yay for one-shot ideas! Youz has given me an... (insert dramatic music of choice here) idea! |
| RoraShigoto 2008-01-06 ch 4, | abuseI must say, you've out-done yourself! ^.^ I'm not sure it's very healthy to stay up all night and then laugh your ** off at 7 am. How dare you! You shall cause me to... to die of heart failure! O.o I have no idea what I'm rambling on about! Excuse me while I... um... have a soda!! Yesh! I need soda! ...sorry. Great chapter! |
| RoraShigoto 2008-01-06 ch 3, | abuse*Holds out random cookie* would you like a cookie? you deserve a cookie... Sandwhich room! I want a room like that! (maybe not those exact kinds of sandwhiches (only b/c Im a vegetarian), but said room would be... beyond heaven! Um... sorry, that's not really relevant, eh? ^.^ Yay Demyx and Zexy! I love them! You have surpassed the the title of brilliant, m'dear! |
| RoraShigoto 2008-01-06 ch 2, | abuseI do believe this is the first actual humor fic that I've read that didn't have something completely stupid and wastful involved. ^.^ I wish I could write humor. . . |
| RoraShigoto 2008-01-06 ch 1, | abuseZexion almost made me burst out into a random fit of laughter. And Axel's reaction "What? Where? Did I do it?" Buwhahaha... yay! I loves it! Must.Read.MORE! |