I'm sure plenty of people have pointed his out before, but I wanted to say, the reason i thought you had put the Mulan song in is because Edward was making cupcakes, which is girly, so Emmett was taunting him saying "I'll make a man out of you," suggesting he wasn't manly...but apparantly you didn't, but maybe on a subconcious level you did, or i'm just reading way too much into it, but YAY for the song, and i love the story so far :D

I love the sequel...it was more funnier because you could understand everything...i am happy i did not read this story in class i would have been laughing so hard like the other story and my friends would think i was insane...i know i am crazy but i want to keep it on the down low...lol...thanks i loved it...i still cant stop laughing...my bros think i am nuts though because i wont stop laughing but that is all cool...thanks me love your story

Wasn't that song in Mulan? The Disney movie?
~Twilighter

Out of curiosity, are the song lyrics from Mulan? It made me giggle reading them so I have a feeling they are :]

I love Mulan. It was on the other night. Watched it with the kids.

I loved this version. Are you going to do the epilogue as well. Hearing what Emmett was thinking was so funny.

Good to see you didn't give up on this one. A satisfying ending. Well done.

I just found this story and fell in love with it!! Awesome writing.

When they started kissing i thought there was going to be a lemon but phew. Love the story

UPDATE SOON...please? TEEHEE :)

Aw... so... complete?

*tear*

AMAZING writing. Fascinated by how good it was.

Adorable, as always.

OMG! Be a Man from Mulan? That's just epic right there... >.

I liked it. I was so excited to see an update, I forgot that I had this story on my alert list but it is such a good one I'm glad to see its continuing.

Aww, too cute! The whole reason I've been reading this rewritten version was just so that I could see this scene from his POV, and now that I have, it definitely came up to all my expectations and more! That was excellent, and more pieces like this will be very welcome in the future.

Yippee! An update on Cupcakes. You made my cold and gloomy day when I saw that pop up into my inbox. I had to wait, however, a day of so until I was alone and could concentrate (nothing like trying to read good fanfic with the phone ringing, kids screaming, and the TV blaring). I am glad I did!

Good chapter--one of your best. Very well written and in character.
Thanks for updating.