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Havaru
2008-08-28
ch 1,
abuseI seriously can't believe this only has a measely 22 reviews-- this story deserves far more :)

You've got an incredible talent at writing and i'm looking forward to checking out some of your other stories once i'm done with this review. I'm really impressed with your characterization of everyone in this, and no one was the least bit OOC to me.

The begining was really sweet, I can just imagine Fugaku being like that, heh. Although, the end is what really got me :O I cried like a little girl from hachi onward.. especially at juu when Sasuke and Sakura were being watched by Mikoto up in heaven ;_; That just pulled at my heartstrings in a oh-so-wonderful way and wrapped up the story beautifully.

Keep up the wonderful work!! +favorite story/author/alert for you!
cOmPuTeR-bAbE
2008-08-13
ch 1,
abuseThis story is great- I cried a little when Mikoto died (and I rarely cry when reading fic.s) You're right, she DOES need some more spotlight, and i'm glad I discovered this story. Beautiful and very well written!
IDontNeedToReply
2008-08-11
ch 1,
abuseThat was so beautiful and sad! You portrayed everyone just right, and it was a fitting ending.
Sinning Angel
2008-07-14
ch 1,
abuseaw...this is so cute!! Love it!
VanillaMostly
2008-04-04
ch 1,
abuseThis is just amazing... so sad and beautiful. You're right, there IS a serious lack of Mikoto and Fugaku, and I'm glad you wrote this. I love it!
LonelyDreamer7
2008-04-02
ch 1,
abuseaww this is so kawaii! and very refreshing! there aren't too many of this around! loved it!
Diamond Mask
2008-03-17
ch 1,
abuseWith the exception of the SasuSaku, that was absolutely lovely. Sorry, I am very prejudiced against Sasuke and Sakura as a couple ^^ but it was still a very sweet and fitting ending.
coconut.mandarin
2008-03-15
ch 1,
abuseI love how you portrayed Fugaku, especially.
Spazztasticle
2008-03-14
ch 1,
abusethat mad me cry. Not a lot of things make me cry anymore. Its very good.
iigaken
2008-03-04
ch 1,
abusecute! ;D
firefly
2008-02-20
ch 1,
abuseThis was so tender and heartbreaking. DX I especially loved how you characterized teenage Mikoto and Fugaku, and their marriage as a whole.

Wonderful fic.
nazzy and jerkez
2008-02-11
ch 1,
abuseIt was very beautiful. The idea was BRILLIANT and the FugakuMikoto pairing is too cute to be true T_T It is just like SasuSaku!

The "titles" of every chapter, what does it stand for? I recognized some of them, but...

Anyway, very beautiful. Saved and loved.

*glomp attack of love*

love /nazaliasan
Petite x Femme
2008-02-10
ch 1,
abuseI thought of this as a tragic version of that storybook, "Love
You Forever." Both stories made me teary-eyed.

I'm glad I'm not alone when I think about Fugaku & Sasuke being parallels. It leaves my mind at ease. This was a truly phenomenal story-- I'm so glad I was able to read this!
Gomen.. i liked the numbers...
2008-01-27
ch 1, anon.
abuseAlright, I'm not going to lie, I didn't really read the whole thing. I kina skipped around. But I loved what I read. Sorry, for not reading the intirety, for I know you probably worked ** it. But atleast i thought it was good. XD

Ta!

-CalwynN.D.Forever
Queen Pina
2008-01-26
ch 1,
abuseI positively ADORED this. It was just wonderful. You had me in on the first part, with the napkin bit. Gosh, this was lovely!

:D
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