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| Leah Day 2008-01-31 ch 1, | abuseGorgeous. |
| Lady-Lollie 2008-01-12 ch 1, | abuseOh that was great ! So sweet ! Lollie |
| MrsB108 2007-12-10 ch 1, | abuseWow, excellent fic. Great writing. |
| Zelofheda 2007-12-09 ch 1, | abuseAt last, another Guy hurt/comfort story! Very nicely written, too. I loved the picture of Guy lying on the bed with his right arm cradled against his chest. It made him seem so vulnerable, especially when Marion asks to see his arm and he gives her his left hand. Then he claims he doesn't need a pain draught! Why are men so stubborn? :D I also liked Marion's thoughts during this vignette, how she knows her thoughts are disloyal to Robin, but can't help seeing his actions in the forest as childish and selfish. Her parting thought was good, too, how she knows that she's playing with fire when she's close to Guy, and yet it doesn't stop her from coming to his room in the middle of the night to help. |
| cobra judy 2007-12-09 ch 1, | abuseGreat scene! I've wondered about that wound since the episode aired. It's completely believable that Marian would do what she could, and you get both of them down just right here, reticent and untrustworthy as they are with each other, and yet still somehow in touch. Thanks for rounding off the ep so nicely! |