 KSasuke 2009-11-06 . chapter 4hahaha! (screams like the fangirl of sasuke's she is) I lovove this story!! Sasuke and Sakura foreva! thanks for writing! btw...is this the end? O.o |
 africana 2009-09-03 . chapter 4The last one was my favorite. My favorite line: “I mean, my babies would likely have the Sharingan and homicidal tendencies and skin with no pigmentation…”
So true and hilarious. Great job |
 FujixSaku0709 2009-07-08 . chapter 4oh gosh, I LOVE all of it XD absolutely Sasuke's last line XD SO HAWT XD the glow in the dark thing (chapter 3) was totally hilarious! laughed so hard on that one XD |
 Shubhs 2009-05-20 . chapter 4Aw!I found these one shots REALLY nice!XP XD |
 Naruto/Mangafan 2009-04-03 . chapter 4 ...interesting... |
 hypheniated 2009-03-28 . chapter 4um, I kinda read only the last one, cause of the summary :P
HHAHHAAHAH, that is an awesome line. "well do you want to make one right now?"
dear god, that made me laugh so hard. Crappy babies, too? |
 Llamas Are Sexy 2009-03-24 . chapter 4JAJAJAJAJAJAJA!
Sasuke being Sasuke is so funny. Erm. That doesn't make sense does it? Well...
Sasuke being slightly OOC can be funny. Lulz..
And this was just a thought passing but I'll bring it up anyways:
So I know you like Grey's Anatomy (Writers have a tendency to like, you know, omit their likes and interests onto their characters and their personalities, and when I read "TheCherryOnTop" She talked about Grey's Anatomy a few times. So either you or one of your close friends likes it. A lot.) and I was wondering about the Story title and the Story Titles and what they had to do with each other.
So... I'm guessing that the "Mc" part would come from an inside joke with your friends or whatever about "McDreamy" or "McSteamy" and the chapter titles, you know, babies, dog, etc, would come from episodes you saw, or like, certain scenes you might've caught.
And then the Title. "Shades of Grey".
Uh. Yeah. Totally misleading.
At first glance I thought it was going to be angsty and stuff, but it wasn't. Surprise me right out the door!
umm..
Yeah. "Shades of Grey" "Grey's Anatomy"
Thats cute. And clever.
But then again, I might just be thinking too much.
Ah well. I like the way you write. It's awesome.
Makes me want to be inside your head sometimes.
Lulz.
Anyways. Update soon, plz. This was Fcking AWESOME. I praise thee...
(\-.-/) I AM NOT WORTHY! |
 Llamas Are Sexy 2009-03-24 . chapter 3This was unexpected.
But that doesn't take away from how awesome it was!
lol
SYPHILIS!
Isn't that, Iono, incurable?
That would suck. Shinobi already have short life expectancy rates or whatever it is.
That would REALLY suck...
sighsighsigh
Well. Onto the next-
kjfdsjhdfsjkdfkljfds
Ohyeah. One more thing...
THE ENDING WAS FVCKING PRICELESS!
Okay. Srsly.
ONTOTHENEXTCHAPTER (woosh!) |
 Sakura.NightHeart 2009-03-22 . chapter 1:L
this storyy is funny :L |
 Sweetnevermore 2009-03-21 . chapter 4*giggle* very cute |
 you.broke.a.promise 2009-03-19 . chapter 4lmfao. |
 Animecherryblossem33 2009-03-16 . chapter 4lol.that was SO funny and cute! hehe. i liked it! especailly the ending! nice job! |
 CalwynN.D.Forever 2009-03-15 . chapter 4i love it! continue with these amazing oneshots soon! Their fantastical! |
 stariinights 2009-03-14 . chapter 4OMG that is hilarious. Crappy genes, homicidal tendencies, skin with no pigmentation. And "Well you want to make one now" That is freaking PRICELESS. Update soon |
 Moon-Diva 2009-03-11 . chapter 4ROLF!
Sasuke, "...if you don’t want babies or you don’t babies with me and my crappy genes then… well just say so!”
Oh wow, I have the hardest time imagining Sasuke saying that but when I do it's hilarious. (: |