i like this! You continue no doubt. And I'm glad you agreed to come back and write more. Good choice=)

YAY! Another update. Hm, I wonder what Naomi has to say to Dell. The fact that she came all the way to his house really says something. I am eager to know what she wants to talk about.

And trust me, I share your sentiments about Dell and Naomi. But this is nothing new to me. I'm used to rooting for the underdog ship. I just like that in ALL groups scenes, they always seem to be standing or sitting next to each other. Reaching I know but I take what I can get. And I am more of a glass half full type girl. To me, making Dell a father shows that there is more similarities between Nai and Dell now. Just hang in there. The show is shaping up well and all relationships go through phases. I have my fingers crossed that Dell and Naomi will make their way back to each other.

WOW!

There is so much going on in this chapter. It's like heart-stopping and intense. Dell and Naomi playing two step, the practice being investigated and sued, and then you end it with Addison and Kevin going head to head in the hallway. So so awesome.

I can't wait to see what happens in the next chapter. Keep up the good work!

I really like this story! I also want to see what happens with Addison and pete and the kevin thing.

Um, yeah, Dell and Naomi better not be over. The angst, the drama, the conflicts, I LOVE IT!

Yay! I am soo glad you are back. But remember, school comes first. Get all your work done and then lavish us with Dell and Naomi.

And I know you are super excited the show will be coming back. JUST TWO MORE WEEKS! Oh, it seems like forever.

Anyways, nice short and sweet chapter. I really like how I could picture all of this happening on the beach. We need more scenes like that. Like I am all for a company picnic this season. They need to get out of those walls of Oceanside Wellness. But yay for a new chapter. And yay for Dell making a mature decision. Naomi and Sam, the ball is in your court now.

Update dont stop!

YES!

Please write more. I like the way you were taking this story and I really want to see where you take Naomi and Dell. And yes, there were tons of cliffhangers left. You have to write more but only if time permits. I know how college and life can get in the way so just do what you can when you can.

Thanks bunches!

Keep Writing! I love this story. And my birthday is October 1st! Yeah for me!

Please write more...I have really enjoyed this story! :)

I would love to read more of this story. You left it on too many cliffhangers for it to end !

YES!

Sun, sand, and sea, here I come. I cant wait to see the surfing lesson Naomi gets from Dell. And what was up with Naomi removing her ring? I mean, she loves Sam, right? Let the world see a symbol of that love. Right?

And now she is having surfing lessons with Dell. Looks like Naomi is not wasting any time trying to live life to the fullest after the night she has had. I can't wait to see what other things she opens herself up to now that she has this new outlook on life.

Ok so surfing lessons? Best ideal yet. And thanks for putting the image of a wet Dell in my head. Won't be able to focus on anything today. Can't wait for your next chapter!

WOW.

Umm, talk about intense. That was action-packed right there. Totally reminds me of that episode when Sam was trapped in the convenience store with that pregrant chick with the gun. But I LOVED this chapter. Especially how Naomi immediately thought of Dell when the crazy guy revealed the bomb or at the end when she had this huge epiphany...which I am pretty sure we all know what it is. PLUS, Dell knew the right wire! They would all be dead if she had listened to Sam. I don't know if you were showing us some symbolism there but I can see it.

I really hope Naomi chooses the right wire...I mean, man...:-)

Enjoy the rest of your Spring Break! Be safe!

im luving this story, i jus luv Dell and Naomi, so much

"Naomi gave a Sam a warm smile, before frowning gently knowing what she had to do." Is that breaking off the engagment with Sam? Cause I hope it is. Anyways had my heart beating fast there for a coulpe of min. Great chapter BTW, can't wait for the next one.