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| XxtomoyoXchan93xX 2008-06-09 ch 3,  | abusehow very interesting... |
| Gribigribi 2008-03-13 ch 1, | abuseVery nice and pretty sentimental. But i dont get it. Why Colin hang his jacket to Tory if he easly can take one in the near closet? Oh, well, technical details are not important but i cant stop notice them, heh. Way to go! |
| forbalathegreen 2008-01-23 ch 1, | abuseaw! that was so cute!! i have yet to read past chapter like 5, but whatever haha XD this was so great!! |
| Courtnylovesramen 2008-01-09 ch 1, | abusei think that colin is a little out of character. |
| mutantpaperclipwarrior 2008-01-03 ch 3, | abuseThat, was funny. |
| wonder1440 2008-01-02 ch 3, | abuseOoh, I hope Tory doesn't think colin set him up. |
| Chikorita-Trainer1 2008-01-02 ch 3, | abuseOh my gosh! How embarrassing! But good chapter, great story, and thanks for reviewing mine! |
| mutantpaperclipwarrior 2007-12-30 ch 2, | abuseVery cute...very cute indeed. and a devious colin? funny too! |
| wonder1440 2007-12-18 ch 2, | abuseI love it! Thanks for updating! |
| Simply Manialoll 2007-12-18 ch 2, | abuseThanks for telling me about the update! I liked this chapter very much! Colin is funny when he does something like this XD I really like your stories a lot! I have a little bit of advice though: when a character says something, does an action, then says something else, you should put them on the same line. Example: Instead of: “No.” he said to himself. “I can barely stay alert as it is.” You can put: “No.” he said to himself. “I can barely stay alert as it is.” That way it doesn't make the readers think that another character is saying the second line :) Well that's all I have to say for now, thanks again for telling me! I apreciate it very much :D |
| Chikorita-Trainer1 2007-12-18 ch 2, | abuseThat's great! Keep up the good work! |
| Chikorita-Trainer1 2007-12-13 ch 1, | abuseAw...! Now THAT'S cute! |
| Simply Manialoll 2007-12-10 ch 1, | abuseHow cute! On the side, I wonder how Colin's systhem reacts to a cold... (I have a weirded out theory that Colin is a plant. I even found a couple of weak (very weak) arguments that can prove it! ;D |
| wonder1440 2007-12-09 ch 1, | abuseNow Colin's got the Tory disease... in more ways than one LOL Very cute. They can both snuggle until the nurse each other back to health, and then Mandy can bring the homework and discover what's really going on ;-) |