Aww! Poor Snipes! I feel bad for him, but hopefully he'll get over it. He's only 10, after all. Now I want to hug him and give him a hot bath. Cute story! I enjoyed reading it! Keep up the great work! Now, I'm off to work on your challenge!

the ending seemed a little rushed, but this was well crafted. APLAUSE. my favorite part was the "lightning-ing" very cute

Aw! This was cute! And sad. I really like it. Bravo.