this is good. really good. i love the background look into our darling jake. is there more? there should be!

KEWL if you finish please send me the whole thing

Good job! I think you wrote Jake better than the actual writer's for the show!

Too lazy to sign in, sorry. This was great. I really like how you capture Jake's inner musings. It gives the story a new angle, I love angles. Please keep writing more pieces such as this one.

Good!

What can I say? You've done it again! A truly enjoyable story, AND you've managed to flesh out Jake's character & motivations quite nicely while at the same time staying within the series continuity.

You are truly a master... :)