Beautiful and sweet. I could picture most, if not all, of these scenes, and they all seems very likely to me.

great story! i especially liked the part about allen's eyes xD

Oh, wow. This is simply breathtaking and amazing. I loved the repetition of "It was not just fate" and how it ties with who Allen and Lenalee are. You got their personalities down perfectly and I can definitely imagine them saying and doings those things too. Great job!

Aw! This is so cute!

absolutely beautiful.
keep it up :)

wah! :)
totally wonderful! :D
i loved it,.,.
every bit of it,.,. ;)
*clicks the faves button*
kyaa! i love Allen and if he was real i want him to be MINE! ;D
BUT! :)
if Lenalee would be real as well,.,. then i'll just have to play CUPID! ;)
*hugs Allen and Lenalee*
great story! :D

I have nothing to say, other than the fact that that was one of the most beautiful one-shots I have ever read.

It is, in my opinion better than may full-length stories I've read, actually.

A Masterpiece.

~Zeida

That was just. plain. awesome. Seriously. There aren't enough AllenxLenalee's out there.

*bawls* Several kinds of awesome I can't name all but thank you so much for such a lovely, amazing read!

I only got to watch episode 30 but I'm really moved in this one-shot story. I don't have anything to support as pairings but after reading this I think there's already a spark between the two. And I thank you for making it grow :D

This is very beautifully wrtten..

*Adds to favorites*

Nice. I liked the way the story flowed, moving from one topic to the next with the same beginning.

Happy Holidays!

-Hikari Adams

whoa. superb writing man!^^good job! *thumbs up*

Lovely..

DUDE. I DON'T KNOW THIS FANDOM.

I don't know characters, or dynamics, or places, or ANYTHING.

I still thought this was amazingly gorgeous.

It was not just fate that Lenalee had always wanted a child with clear blue eyes. Although her own purple was royal, Kanda's gray was commanding, and Lavi's green was compelling, she daydreamed of a beautiful boy with wild black hair and sky-colored eyes. Lavi shrewdly pointed out that Allen had blue eyes when she mentioned this desire to him, and she blushed a deep red before saying that it was because she loved the sky and its never-ending presence.

She would be crying, but she would still be so angelic, her hair silhouetted against the morning sky, or golden twilight. If he could, he would kiss her hands and her weeping eyes, her sunken cheeks, her tangled hair, her mangled mouth.

OKSPOSPOFPOSIPSSKFHSKJHAKLDHAL

HI. MY NAME IS ANNE, AND YOU'VE CAUGHT YOURSELF A NEW FANGIRL.

:D

(I realize this review is far, far less coherent than the one you left me, but such is the pwer of your pretty, pretty words.)

♥♥♥♥