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Reviews For: Blue Water

Arysani
2008-06-21
ch 1,
abuseFunny how I thought I was the only one upset that Garrus never gets any lovin'. I mean, he's a humanoid, so it's not like it's COMPLETELY impossible...O_o

I really enjoyed this - an "almost" just partway into the journey.

And I still remain convinced that the first time I played ME through, that I left a conversation with Garrus, and he says "Commander?" and you turn to face him and "Yes Garrus?" and he says "Nevermind."

Granted, because every time after that I did do his little side-quest, maybe it was all about not getting enough info from him to delve into that side-quest the first time around, but it still felt...like there was "something" there...

So obviously a big fan of anything Shep/Garrus, and I hope you'll write more, because this is very well paced.
brokenpassions
2008-04-08
ch 1,
abuseJust right in my point of view. Gotta love the GarrusxFemShep romances.
Gidibigibidi-etc
2008-01-13
ch 1,
abuseChaos, I adore your stories, I log on like a maniac just to see if there is anything new...please, continue!
You are very gifted-thank you, a huge double thanks for loving Garrus as gently as he deserves!
There is nothing wrong with a little romantic daydreaming...how else could you fall for a sweet alien?:)

Keep it coming, Chaos, you have talent!
Best of luck, X

Gidibigibidi-etc, the Feersum Endjinn(copyright-Iain M. Banks:)
JadeTheCon
2008-01-10
ch 1,
abuseI've said it once, I'll say it again, I love your stories, and this one happens to be my favorite :-) You capture Garrus' personality perfectly while still making him seem different... Now I got myself confuzzled! Hehe, love it!

-Jade, out! xD
VoiDreamer
2008-01-07
ch 1,
abuseHmm...I don't know how it happened, but I'm surprised to find I missed reviewing this fic. Sorry! I've read this at least five times through so I appologize - the restraint between the two and the end was lovely :) Very realistic!

We'll miss you!
blackrogue123
2007-12-28
ch 1,
abuseThis was a nice one. I like Garrus SLIGHTLY more than i do Ashley. (her sense of humor cracks me up) I think you pretty much nailed his personality, which is surprising since he never really showed his soft side in the game.
CrimsonOmen
2007-12-23
ch 1,
abusePretty good, albeit short. (If you really want Garrus as an option you can start a crusade on their forums.)
Devi Serene
2007-12-22
ch 1,
abuseAww, its so cute ! You got Garrus' personality perfectly and I loved your writing. I really love fShepxGarrus pairings and I really hope you continue writing about them!
TurianLover
2007-12-21
ch 1, anon.
abuseI love Gaarus. I think you did his character just fine. I even read his lines with his voice in my head. I'm thinking about doing a Gaarus fic of my own and I share your frustration in not having Gaarus as a romance choice (we should go to bioware and make them create a version of Mass Effect just for us!). Anyway, nicely written and I love your descriptions!
quicksilver2402004
2007-12-13
ch 1,
abuseAw... Squee! That was awesome! I demand more!! Lol :) I love Garrus
skykissedwindknight
2007-12-12
ch 1,
abuseYEAH! Someone else who likes Garrus! I thought I was crazy for a while...(blinks) Anyway, excellent story. I don't think you got his character wrong. Please write more about our favorite Turian.

Sky
Vampirika
2007-12-11
ch 1,
abuseI'm a big fan of the femShep/Garrus pairing, and this is an awesome piece! Are you going to do a longer one?
shoemy89
2007-12-10
ch 1,
abuseI don't know what it is about the femShepardxGarrus fics that I like so much, but I'm glad to have read another great take on the pairing. You did a nice job on the Garrus personality as well. I hope you write more!
D.M.
2007-12-10
ch 1, anon.
abuseGreat fic., you did a great representation of garrus. I was hoping more people would write more of this pairing, it in intrigues me.
Lahara
2007-12-10
ch 1,
abuseWow! I get to be the first reviewer! I'm so honored you mentioned my fic, and that it inspired you to write!

I think it was well written. I mean, everyone's idea of Shepard is going to vary because everyone will play him/her differently, so the internal thoughts and motivations of Shepard in writers is going to vary to. Might be an interesting thing to add though, that even though Shepard is you know, tough war hero chick and all... she still gets nervous around relationship stuff. Just a thought.

Garrus seems pretty much right on... thought to be honest off the top of my head I don't remember how he reacted to the rachni queen. I think he was concerned prior to her release because I think he mentioned their history... Garrus is a little complex but not terribly so once you break it down. I think you've got his personality great for a one shot though. It's mostly centered around Shepard and her thoughts, so his actions look about right on.

Interesting take on the femShepard/Garrus!! If you want to write more or other stuff I totally support you. Keep up the good work!
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