Masochists, CX

I like this. I love Neji chasing something he lost himself, I love Tenten shoving him aside, I love the way the inner voices run into each other. What an awesome oneshot. *adds to faves no jutsu!*

Nice story!

I like it. its different from all the straight up stories out there. Different in a good way. Two thumbs up for this one

One of the best NejiTens ever! Perfection! I just couldn't stop reading... Keep it up!

Don't tell me you wrote the word ** as part of your essay?

Anyway, I liked your story. It suited Neji and Tenten. My only concern was that it was too damn short. But then again, if you had made it longer, it might've just seemed ... dragging. Alright then, ignore me. I'm talking nonsense. Nice story. Short and snappy. Keep up the good work.

~morphy

It's kinda hard to comprehend but it's still really cute!

Fantastic! That was incredibly powerful and just... fantastic!

Awesome AWESOME job!