ok, im just gonna leave this short and sweet...

MORE. PLEASE.

that is all XD

ps-and i hope it all builds up to a happy conclusion. Keep It Balanced!

I was really disappointed to see this story stop right here at this chapter. It really was good. I was looking forward to reading each next chapter, even when my internet was out. I hope you may consider updating this at some future point.

First Kasumi, then Hitomi comes to lighten up Alex's life. This story just keeps getting better. I have enjoyed reading this fanfic and gonna read it again. Can't wait for the next chapter. Really nice work, keep writing! :)

Over the past few weeks I have treated myself to a re-read of this fic. Read a couple of chapters everynight while lying in bed. Your fic is fantastically orcistrated and every little detail is carefully thought out. It is clear you have spent alot if time on this so far and it has paid off. I can't wait to see how it all ends. Although I have my own thesis on what's gonna happy. Anyway keep the good writing up

-JB

Saw there was a new chapter smile on mah face Read the chapter with all it's fluff moments Hitomi awsomenesssmile on mah Got to the cheesy but not to cheesy endingsmile on mah face Realized it really ended cause I'm writing this reviewsmile fading... See yah in a month or threeP

Loved this chapter, especially when kasumi and Alex were bout 2 kiss. The ending made me laugh 2 keep up the excellent work

Loved this chapter, especially when kasumi and Alex were bout 2 kiss. The ending made me laugh 2 keep up the excellent work

AWESOME! I was wondering when alex would learn that kasumi didnt have a bf. Man having hitomi around sure livened things up and boy if she sticks around for a while i cant wait to see what happens if seiji gets to meet her. Oh and alex's mom knows...yeah that is gonna be one wierd convosation at the dinner table. Keep it up dude.

Hitomi is certainly having fun with Alex and Kasumi, an excellent example of a Shipper on Deck for those two. Can't blame Alex for being nervous having Hitomi around, especially living in his house! I couldn't help but burst out laughing when Hitomi asked Alex to the 'judge' for her and Kasumi in swimsuits! It was cute how Kasumi was acting so shy around Alex when she came out in that swimsuit, his reaction was great! A definite good trait of hers is having some sound advice for both Alex and Kasumi, heaven knows they needed it. I also wish Hitomi had waited just a bit more to come out of those curtains, Alex and Kasumi almost kissed! Thanks to her the misconception Alex had at the beach has now been cleared away. I find myself rooting for Alex and Kasumi to get closer yet again thanks to Hitomi. Good bit of humor to round it off too.

Only a few errors I noticed, the only ones that are truly noticeable are when 'her' was cut off at 'he' when Kasumi blushed and 'you're' was written as 'your' when Hitomi was describing Kasumi as one of her best friends. Apart from that perfect job!

I feel your pain with many good games to play right now.

Wow. Ayane donned the supportive sister role... Who'd a think it'd happen? Kind of an anti climactic kind of resolution, but thinking about their relationship to each other, and Alex's Alex-ness, it can't be helped I guess.

Man, and just by how much does he hate himself anyway? Let the kid inside him who's crying while banging them fists on the bathroom floor out already... why do I feel if Alex was a female from a shoujo mag, this will all make sense? Bet he's going to misunderstand Kasumi and Ryu training, get more depressed and pissed (or just go dead inside, temporarily).

Ugh, I actually agreed with a scumbag character over his analysis of Alex... damn. When will he at least try to get his crap together? But what am I to say? So fa, this is still on the fifteenth chapter! You should get more recognition for this piece that I'm reading, I think so, at least.

Damn, he's driving me nuts! I'll gladly take up Seiji's offer bout' that two-by-four... And in the end she really was just using him to prove her father wrong. "Predictable" "Controllable"? He gon' end as a gloomy, hen-pecked guy... eh, more gloomy than he is right now, until he realizes just what the hell he's yearning for (or admit it). He's not dense, just a bad case of the "hedgehog's dilemma". Who does he think he is, Orimura Ichika?

Hrm, the messed up chick's trying to mindfuck the imouto, huh...

And here I was wondering where Ayane was at...