Unfreaking believable. Absolutley splendid. I loved it. Every bit of it. I must say, normally when I read a story, I usually have a habit of visualizing it in anime form, and there was no exception with this one. But the way this one came out, I was blown away. It completely revitalized my passion for reading. Make more!

Amazing...Simply amazing...I actually HAD TO adjust the monitor so I could keep reading with my eyeballs becoming melted, it was that good. I mean, for some reason, it's the same played out, horse jack that I usually read on other stories, but I like this one. So far so good.

I Like This Story.

Plese continue writing more chaptors.

Definitely different. I suspect alot of character development between Kasumi and your OC. But hey that's a good thing.

I'm interested in how this will go. It's certainly worth reading.

Would you believe I've been looking for this kind of story for awhile?

*cough*

Anyway, I like it. It's a good start. I'll definitely keep an eye on this.

Typically I stick away from OC stories, but seeing as how great of a writer you are, and how well Devil Factor is going, I figured "what the heck".

Very nice setup and a very promising premise. Please update soon.

Wow, you have a knack for making some seriously cool and bad ass stories. I'm too sleepy to write a more detailed review, ill do it l8er. but anyways, good job, first chapter setting a great pace for what will hopefully be a great story.

good story update soon!

I like this story. Plese write some more chapters and maybe add lemon & a pregnacy in later chapters.

KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK!