DUDE!

DUDE!

I AM GONNA NEED YOU TO CONTINUE THIS LIKE NOW!

IT WAS ABSOLUTLY AMAZING AND I REALY THINK THAT YOU CAN DO SOME GREAT THINGS WITH THIS STORY!

PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE WRITE MORE!

I AM SO BEGGING YOU!

Was this a one shot? I hope not, its really good, very well written. you should continue it. _

I really liked this story. I liked everything from her power to her name, I would definatly encourage you to expand this somehow.

I need moorez! I love this story! Tis very saad. Rescue her someone!

You have quite a great character here. Make a Longer fic and rescue her. it doesn't have to have romance and it doesn't have to be Peter, just rescue her.

Aw! ::sniffle:: That was actually quite heartbreaking. I love that this new character was the silent canon observer in the most painful ironic way. BRILLIANT job!

Wow. Just...wow. That was so perfect.

..and what's even better is that now I really wish they had done that on the show, like Lorelei was a character.

...damn company, taking away people's speech. XD

I loved it.