This was a great story! And I must say that the ending tied it off perfectly! :) I've now read a couple of your stories - and I apologize that this is the first I have reviewed - but they've all been really good so I've been working my way through reading each of them!

really awesome story! it could have been a movie same with the other one i read of urs!

I absolutely loved this story! You are one of the best writers on this site! I love your ability to write about things with so much detail that it leaves no question in my imagination! I can see it so clearly! Love it.

And if I had to choose one time period to live in it would be England in the 1700s. to live in the time where Jane Austen lived!

Thanks so much for writing this, and sharing it with all of us.
~Dreamer6164~

well
it took me forever to read this ( secretly )
but it was amazing.
i think its the best ive read ever hahahha
thanks for writing it

o...
this chapter was just soo angsty.
i love it! :D

Why can't she ever stay mad? Why? If the pirate guy I loved stole the last memento from my father that I had, a sob story and a kiss would NOT make up for it. Maybe Kagome is nicer than me.

However, I do like your use of the Shikon as something other than a wish granting pink glass thing.

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No!
you could of SO kept this going forever... It was wondeful to read... I haven't read Like I've mentioned before, very many AU fics but this one... m. beautiful!

A heart of the sea, something so true... I like the siren twists and turning Inu-kun human (Something I never like) You wrote wonderfully and I loved it.

I will check out some of your other stories I suppose, if this one was so good I can only wonder how your others are!
Thank you for such a wonderful read. It makes me miss home... the deep blue waters never ending horizon... the flow of the boat rocking on open water... m... wonderful stuff!
Again
Thank You.
-Surf

beautiful

Again... Mucho-Loveo
That's all I can say!
=D
-Surf

=3 Mucho-Loveoh!
and I just totally missed a nights worth of sleep because I couldn't stop reading... I'm forcing myself now... now that it's six am... ugh. I have class today too! haha!

Good Story, I can't wait to dive into the rest of it later today =D

-Surf

I LOVE YOU! =D
Good Good Story,
I've not ever met anyone else other then my father, not even in stories... Of one who loved the sea like I do... It's a nice feeling... though I don't know if your just writing it or if you feel it as well? Regardless, it's well written and I'm quickling becoming addicted!

Thanks,
Surf-

Aww... why's the Sake gone?
oh yeah and Pirates own Ninja...

I'm not sure if you got my review on the first chapter, my internet is a bit screwed up!
anyway, What I had said was somewhere around this.
I'm not one to branch out of the normal Inu plot line, I've only read one other story that I've liked thats an au so this is OBVIOUSLY an impressive story.
You did a marvalous job with the first chapter, I haven't read this one yet. haha I'm about to though.

Oh, and to have a "heart of the sea" Is possibly the truest thing ever, I've been born and raised on the water. I have pictures of me in dipers fishing in open ocean with my father =3 I have always felt that "call" to the water, and I really felt connected when you mentioned it... =D

Keep up the good work, You have a hard critic here whom is VERY interested!
=D
-Surf

Wow. I'm speechless. Really. This was such a wonderful ending! Wonderful job! Kudos to you! I love how you were able to paint the pictures in my head of what was going on, it was like actually being in the story. You are a wonderful writer! Good luck with your next story!

Inuyasha is so complex. Thank goodness for Toutosai's wisdom.