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doc.exe
2008-08-24
ch 1, anon.
abuseProbably, the best fanfiction I have read with Shino as the main protagonist. Your characterization of him is right on spot. I wish there were more fanfiction centered on him. He is an incredible character.

I wonder what happened to Kurenai and if her team managed to recue her, but I suppose you left that open on purpose.

Personally, my only complaint is that I would have liked to read a more detailed description of Idate's suffering. What can I say? I simply enjoy watching cocky bastards like him reveal themselves as the cowards they are and pleading for their lives (or for a quick death in this case) when things go nasty and out of their control. It's like a drug to me, I simply can't get enough of it. ^_^

I depart for now! Keep writing. And good luck!
Xarkun's Shadow
2008-08-21
ch 1,
abuseWhoa, Shino's a hardass. Nice!
demonicnargles
2008-08-21
ch 1,
abuseNice. Good work with this one-shot, I really liked it.

-demonicnargles
SylvanDreamer
2008-08-15
ch 1,
abuseThis fic is awesome. And to top it all off, you managed to pull it off with Shino being the main character. He kicks so much ** here.

I love the entire concept. It just puts the whole 'being a Konoha nin' into perspective. Great job.
Artendome
2008-08-14
ch 1,
abuseA realistic story.
Haruka-Hime
2008-06-26
ch 1,
abuseThis is the best depiction of Shino I have ever seen.
Kage of the village hidden ...
2008-06-12
ch 1,
abusewow grusum yet amazing
kylefisher200
2008-04-21
ch 1,
abuseShino is cold. Shino is creepy. Shino is smart. And he is voided of any speck of mercy.

Shino is the one true ninja in the Naruto series. And you have managed to capture just that.
...*mental huggles*
30CK
2008-04-15
ch 1,
abuseI get shivers every single time I read this. Seriously. This is THE best depiction of Shino I have ever seen; he's logical, calculating, emotionless to the dot, and yet he still cares about his teammates well-being. This is well-written and creepy as hell. I'll haveta check out some of yer other stuff.

*grin*
Empatheia
2008-04-05
ch 1,
abuseA refreshing change from the fics I've been reading lately. Your perspective on inter-country relations between shinobi is unpleasant, yes, but more realistic than most of the peace-and-love-will-triumph pap most of the fic here seems to describe to.

I found Shino to be almost frighteningly in-character-- I had no trouble at all picturing him torturing an enemy for information, and it doesn't make me like his character any less. More if anything.

Thanks for a good read, keep up the excellent work.

~Eia
D the Stampede
2008-02-26
ch 1,
abuseOK, can't believe I faved this without reviewing, but at least I can fix that now. your Shino is cool, logical and absolutely ruthless, I love it.
gone119
2008-02-25
ch 1,
abuseGreat story!
deaththroughlight
2008-02-13
ch 1, anon.
abuseSHINO'S A SADIST! I never thought...wow...wow...well, u receive this compliment: You got me even more scared of bugs...
Kaori Kuni
2008-02-08
ch 1,
abuseGreat one n-n

Well written and interesant one-shot. Yeaah, creepy, but great.

I think there was a character in the Naruto chapters (between chapter 136 and chapter 220) that was named Idate. I don't remember x_x.
At the first part I didn't find any purpose to the shot, because even if it could real happened it doesn't change anything in the Naruto story (really... but the point is...) . But then I just continued reading cuz IT was great n-n

Umm...I think it's all. Thanks for sharing this one-shot :)
Kao-chan
keebler-elmo
2008-01-29
ch 1,
abusehaha. Brutal. Great one shot.
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