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Xaipa
2009-10-25 . chapter 28
Finally, I managed to finish my 'rereading' of PYPYuigi! Who would have thought it would take this long? Then again, I believe this one is more than slightly longer than the other parts of the PYP series. That and real life... oh, how I blame real life right now for this delay!

PYPYuigi starts off after that awfull cliffhanger at the end of PYPShizuka. New characters, new enviroment, new challenges and all the other new awesome plot devices that a sequel has to offer. And I must say, for a sequel (which normally is doomed to never reach the readers expectations) maintained the same quality writing, in charater'ness and good plot development it's prequel had. Basically, this story was wonderfull.
It's interesting that took Seto 18 chapters to have Jounouchi falling in love with him, but then he had to run after him for 28 chapters to actually start they're relationship. xD Poor guy. At least it takes less time for him to get laid (yea, I've already read PYPSeto... I seriously need to review that one too).

Normally I don't read puzzleshipping. I'm not against it, but I can't stop thinking how narcissist Yugi and Yami are... they're are falling in love with a person that has the same face, if not the same soul... but I guess that's what makes them so perfect together. x3

I loved this story. It was as good as the first one and took us out of that horrible cliffhanger... although this one ends in a similar way, but it's not has bad as the last one.
Still, if I had to chose, I would chose Play Your Part Shizuka. The reason is that, compared with the sequels, that one was more planned. The most obvious evidence of that is the titles of the chapters. Also, when reading, we understand that that ending was already decided from the beginning. It just, how can I say, perfect. That's what the continuations of the PYP series lack: the originality and well thought'ness that the first one had.
This is when comparing the 4 stories of the series, because when judging them side by side with other stories, this series is one of the best, if not THE best I've ever read. I just love the way you write. It's so good and has so much quality that actually makes sense for you to take long to update: after all, quality material like this doesn't come easily, it came from hard work.
Dust to Dusk
2009-10-11 . chapter 28
I really enjoyed this story. The characters and plot were all very intricate, and I love the depth of emotion and realism you dealt with. My only complaints are of the minor, grammatical variety, such as an occasional missing or out-of-place word. Still, that didn't stop me from enjoying the story in it's entirety. Wonderful job!
KittyCaesar
2009-08-23 . chapter 28
OMG. So I have to say that I love this AU you have created. Just plain wonderful! Heading over to PYPSeto!
KittyCaesar
2009-08-22 . chapter 21
“I don’t imply, I accuse” <- LOL Very true.

*gasp* Yuugi! Don't do it! lol
KittyCaesar
2009-08-22 . chapter 20
Aw, poor Yuugi. Hope he gets more practice later. lol

And it seems that Bakura really wants Jou. Oh my!

Oh and I loved your Notes for this chapter. Especially the very first sentence and very last sentence! LOL Too true, too true.
KittyCaesar
2009-08-21 . chapter 13
Seto-sexual! YAY! ;D

And lol at Otogi! XD
KittyCaesar
2009-08-21 . chapter 10
Hehe, so I love it how Seto is getting Yuugi and Atemu together~ LOL How cute~
Even if he's only doing it for his own selfish reasons. ^^;
KittyCaesar
2009-08-21 . chapter 8
Epic LOL
KittyCaesar
2009-08-21 . chapter 7
“Well, you’re sexy and I’m sexy” LOL Gotta love Bakura's reasoning! XD

Well, I have to say that I'm loving how everything is coming together! Oh, Bakura is unconsciously pushing Jou to Seto. Woot!
KittyCaesar
2009-08-21 . chapter 4
"He needs to accept the fact that I am male before I am going to even be polite to him.”<- Wonderful Jou statement! It kind of makes me go "huh?" when people make Jou out to be a blushing virgin girl all the time. ^^;
KittyCaesar
2009-08-21 . chapter 3
“I’m the hottest guy in school, I know the talk. Why would you refuse me?” <- LOL Seto!

O, man interesting chapter! And the ball starts rolling! ;D
KittyCaesar
2009-08-21 . chapter 2
“Friendship is the strongest force in the world!” <- OK, I have to admit that I laughed so freakin' hard at that one line! XD A very over-the-top-Anzu-like sentence. lol Oh, and I do really like how you write her. Not too over the top "FRIENDSHIP!" Instead there is a slight aura of it there rather than it punching you in the face. ^^
KittyCaesar
2009-08-21 . chapter 1
Yay! I really like how you set up the beginning here. Good job!
Yami-no-Tamashii
2009-02-12 . chapter 21
ARGH! *FUME FUME FUME* I HATE IT WHEN PEOPLE GET IN THE WAY OF RELATIONSHIPS WHEN THEY THINK THEY'RE PROTECTING THE PERSON WHEN IN REALITY THEY'RE SCREWING EVERYTHING UP! *FUME FUME*
SmokedBoo
2009-02-09 . chapter 10
Well looky here! I don't know why I never finished this story. But now I'm going to. HAZZA! Alright then, now...
Wow. You know, I know a lot of people that actually will only do something if their crush is doing it. And then Yugi does the same thing! I don't get it... I like how Katsuya is making things hard for Seto now. This is so funny how Seto is playing matchmaker just to get the guy. And hm... I wonder what they're gonna do? My bet is on the play. Oh yes, the play. I have a pretty good idea what the play is gonna be too. XD
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