OMG PLEAS WRITE MORE PLEAS YOUR GREAT AT WRITING OMG OMG OMG BUT I WONDER ABOUT SHADE STILL PLEAS KEEP ON WRITING UNLESS YOU DONT WANT TO BUT WRITE MAN WRITE! :)

NO no no pour shadow and the kits poor poor shadow and kits but wait were is shade in all this i wonder hmm NO WRITE MORE CHAPTERS

DANG shadows kid is kinda of well rebelious i cant really find the right word but DANG i hope hes not up to know good I SHALL READ CHAPTER 7 NOW

OMG there keeping their love a secret how romeo and juloiet lol how cute aw i wonder how shadow will take it if they tell him or if he proposes or somthin and i wonder if shaded knows hmm I SHALL READ THE NEXT CHAPTER

aw omg how cute i thought thats would happen shadow feels bad how nice i wonder were he's going I SHALL READ THE NEXT CHAPTER

omg thats kinda sad there little freaind flick left with tails and stopped talking omg though Lol I SHALL CONTINUE READING THE NEXT CHAPTER

A OMG POOR SHEEVA THAT SICK SICK SCIENTIST i was wondering if sonic and the others come to his need or somthin LOL BUT SEARIOUSLY THAT SICK SCIENTISR I SHALL CONTINUE TO THE THIRD CHAPTER

WHOA WHAT JSUT HAPPENED OMG LOL I SHALL CONTINUE READING

simply wonderful
keep up the good work ^_^

Your a good writer I've liked your Shadow/Sonic stories before like this one and other ones.
Unfortunate they don't stop animal testing enough.Shadows right there is unjustice and being treated less than as just an animal.
But this is just me that's all.
Horrible what some scientists do in real life in the name of research.
But that's why these kind of storys get my attention in the first place because it crosses both lines into reality and fiction.
Keep going though but it's good as it is too.

Creepy but true to Shadow and unfortunate animal testing that does go on without mercy.
Well written story from one creepy detail to the next of being stuck in a lab.

Well written Shadow fic.Keep uo the good work.

Hey. I saw your fic and stopped to read it.

Okay, what's the deal? Something happened between chapters three and four that we don't know about; yuo were telling one story in chapt. three and then started something totally different in chapter four.

I'm not flaming you here, I just think you should know. You had a somewhat interesting story going, but I have no idea how it jumped from the events in number three to the events in number four.

With a little corrective work (and some backstory), you could have a good fic.

Keep trying!

L8R

-The All Real Numbers Symbol