:o I almost cried reading this! Its so touching and totally true. Your stories have this air about them that even though they might seem simple on the outside, something deeper is hidden inside. They're perfect! No. Not really. Its just wrong saying that about a story that is talking about how perfection doesn't exist. But I have to say, I really love it! Great job.

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Aww, I love it sooooo much! Very deep xxx

You say no one is perfect.. But this makes me think everyone is perfect, perfect on his or her way.

I always thought I wasn't perfect. But reading this... made me perfect! Another great story 3

it is honestly one of the cutest and best stories I have ever read.

p.s. a little secret I think this is the third time I read this it's simply so good

...That was seriously deep.

As in, it left me going, "...Wow..." at the end.

This is the first story under the genre 'Poetry' I've ever read her on . I figured if it was made by Jaz (P)...

I'm glad I read it.

Really good story.

omg love this fanfic!

Ah defining perfection. So many ways of going about it. But this fic made me reflect upon that. Something seems repetitious, but like previous review, you got your message across.

There's a nice pattern of how the sentences/paragraph are arranged. The ending ended nicely :3 Tho it would be nice to see it extended more with Kyouya/Kaoru interaction than just Kaoru reflecting over Kyouya (that's just me).

Anyways, nice fic :DD

xDD This made me realize I use "perfect" a lot... And actually have to define it. Perfect is something that is "just right." In my vocab anyway.

Anyway, I'm not a fan of KyouKao (I like KyouHika better, but meh xP) but I like your work. So I read it. Since I normally don't have anything better to read. And well, there's only one /little/ tiny thing I have to mention.

Px

There's too much "I think". xP Just my iffy, but it doesn't matter. I just thought it broke up the flow a bit...

But otherwise, it's nice. :D Hit what you wanted to convey and that is that why is something perfect existing when nothing is perfect? xP And then Kaoru's pessimistic thoughts about it. xD

Good job, and *pokes* when are you going to update The Last Love Story? :D