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Reviews For: Future Promise

piccolabimba
2007-10-01
ch 1,
abuseYour writing here is excellent. I've read many novels that were much worse... this moment of completion doesn't appear often in fanfiction, a little bit of originality is always nice. Keep up the good work!
Warg
2006-01-20
ch 1,
abuseHi Calger sama...

This is very good work. It is simple and easy. The pictures evoked are vivid and readily acceptable.

An overall perfectly acceptable end to Battousai-hood...

But this fic is slightly disturbing to me...i'll tell u why...
yume no yami
2005-07-16
ch 1,
abuseyou wrote this in an hour? wow! i would've taken much longer i think :P
Love your story!
skenshingumi
2005-01-23
ch 1,
abuseI love the image of a suddenly light-heartened Kenshin as he realizes he is about to give up the killing. Well-written like all your work.
the simple mind
2004-10-28
ch 1,
abuseVery short...but nice
Aarika
2003-07-06
ch 1,
abuseI'm surprised that no one ever thought to write something like this before. Short, but very inspiriational. I liked it. ^_^
Jovian Angel In Her Lazines...
2003-05-27
ch 1, anon.
abuseHn! I read this quite awhile ago but completely forgot to review it! I don't know, brain cramp or something ^^ Anyways, this is great, I really like it.
Like, honestly, really really like it.
You know, though, you shouldn't diss your own work! It's your job to diss other people's work! Lol, just kidding...
No matter what you say, this is definitely *not* boring! I mean, it doesn't have any head-rolling, gut-spilling action, but really is that all that important here? Don't be so rough on yourself!! ^^*

Keep up the really good work!

Jovian Angel
hakubaikou
2003-03-26
ch 1,
abuseI find it wonderfully refreshing to read a Hitokiri Battousai story that's actually uplifting. I loved how he said goodbye to his sword. I loved how he ran through the fields laughing. I loved the part where he decides not to dwell on the past and to look to the future instead. It's such a different view of the end of Battousai compared to so many other fics, and yet it still works for me. I find it entirely plausible.

I like reading your fics. Haven't read them all yet, especially the longer stories. Been saving them up as treats for when I have more spare time (12+ hr work days are such a bother). Can't wait to get to some of your other stuff.
Phoeaix
2002-11-28
ch 1,
abusecooliez story! your a great writer lol okies enough praise later dayz
Kiriko
2002-09-22
ch 1, anon.
abuseA very cool little fic! You're an excellent writer! Please update "Prism" soon! I put you on my favorites list for it! And that's enough exclamation points for today.
Unseen Watcher
2002-09-10
ch 1,
abuseAh, a very thoughtful piece. I like it. A little tension let down. The poor guy needs all he can get. One of these days I'll get so tired of the angst I'll write a really crackers fic! Who knows. Love your writing style. Thanks for sharing.
Emiri-chan the SPECTACULAR
2002-04-03
ch 1,
abuseYOU ARE SO FREAKIN' GOOD!!!!!
Geez, I still can't believe it! I found the perfect author! YEEHAH!!!
Abby
2001-09-10
ch 1, anon.
abuseWow, great fic! I can just imagine those poor men's bewilderment at Kenshin's quicksilver mood- and personality-changes! Seeing the ice-cold assassin running through a field laughing...they must have just about died of shock! I love the introspective parts as well. In short, wonderful job!
Katala
2001-09-08
ch 1, anon.
abuseSubarshii! Not boring, very nice. ^_^
Susan
2001-09-07
ch 1, anon.
abuseGreat story. Its nice to read a story about Kenshin that is positive and bright about his future.
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