I do like your Yui perspective... sinister and sexy. Nice dream sequence, too! Hope to see more...

Great fic! :D

and I really hope u do another alichino fanfic with Enju, he's my fav character!

The only reason I can think of for why this hasn't been reviewed yet, is because Alichino is not the best-known series. It certainly doesn't have to do with the writing.

This is quite a promising OC, and you give Lord Yui quite a bit of depth; he's an interesting character and invites some god/devil imagery. Hope to see more from you!