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| Shadow Rukario 2008-07-26 ch 5,  | abuseI love this story! I rate it ten outta ten stars! Just the right amount of humor, adventure and taunting! I love how the characters play out! Please update quickly! I bet at the end, the cut master will be puking, like he does in the game, Red and Green(Blue(English translation)) will walk in, Red spots the captain, clamps a hand on his mouth, and runs for the nearest window. Green having a weird face on, or rolling eyes as his reaction, at the sensitivity of Red's stomach. ^.^ That is what I think the end'll be like. Hope it helps! Shadow-Rukario-chan34276 |
| Mew's Silver Heartlock 2008-06-10 ch 5, | abuseThis story is very interesting and funny too! xD Red and Blue crack me up!! It's so cute how they act around each other, though Blue IS sometimes a tad annoying with his excessive snottiness T.T But I love him too! x3 I wonder what could have made him dash off and abandon Red like that though 0_o That was weird!! But I'd love to see what happens next! Nice work, the whole story is very enjoyable to go through. =D |
| SendMoreParamedics 2008-02-24 ch 5, | abuseaH! its so suspenseful! |
| Sakura Moon 2008-01-15 ch 5, | abusePretty interesting turnabout. I wasn't expecting that really. Though poor Red, abandoned by Blue. I hope you'll continue this! |
| Kayoria Kinomiya 2008-01-15 ch 5, | abuseWhat's troubling Blue? I'll tell you what's troubling Blue! XD He's in lurve 8DD with Red. :) |
| Pokefan 2008-01-15 ch 5, anon. | abuseThis story is really well written! It's awsome! I like how Blue is still oblivious to Red's thoughts. I adore this story and I hope you'll update soon! |
| Sakura Moon 2008-01-11 ch 4, | abuseYou know. I was beginning to miss your story updates. Really. And now, I can't help but wonder at the last scene whether they were sharing the same bed or not. Eager for the next update =D Are they 10 or 13 when they started the journey? |
| Kayoria Kinomiya 2008-01-11 ch 4, | abuseYay you updated! :D I should bother you some more *w* Those things work! LOL |
| Yamikochan 2008-01-09 ch 3, | abusei'm really curious ^^ you'll continue this, yes? |
| K. Kinomiya 2008-01-03 ch 3, anon. | abuseBlue winked at Red, "Let's do it." Umm... yeaah. LOL *Dies of nosebleed* |
| zeldazeldina 2007-12-25 ch 1, | abuseOmg ! I simply adore this fic! You are a great writer! |
| LunaLocket 2007-12-16 ch 3, | abuseomg plz update soon ok!! |
| Keela 2007-12-14 ch 3, | abuseI'm enjoying this a lot! I love the dynamics between Red and Blue, and Blue's personality in general ^_^ |
| Jyun Hwa 2007-12-13 ch 2, | abuseYay xD lawl so cute/sexy/everything good about life x3 |
| Pawky 2007-12-12 ch 1, anon. | abuseD': Owah. Pawky like. |