Reviews for The Path Ahead

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SpicyStrawberries 2008-01-21 ch 3,	abuseI've been looking for a story that takes up after Day of the Black Sun! I'm so glad you chose to write this, because I like it better than how the show chose to put things :) I'm aware that you have several different fics being written at the moment, but I hope you continue to post chapters for this one - I'd love to see more.
airnaruto45 2007-12-30 ch 3,	abusenot bad keep it coming
CrissyLF 2007-12-24 ch 3,	abuseGreat chappie! I really liked how Aang opened the seventh chakra... that was very creative!
Fusion Blaster 2007-12-23 ch 3,	abuseDamn I'm just now finding this fic. Author Alert. Another good fic. Some very interesting theorys you got here bout Aang and Kat. I can't wait to see what you have happen next.
Aangs fangirl1214 2007-12-22 ch 3,	abuseProbably not, but it would be amusing. SnakeEyes16 must be a genius! that was a great way for Aang be able to use the Avatar State and you described it very lucid. (if I"m using that word right) I think their conversation was so cute! Awesome!
AirGirl Phantom 2007-12-22 ch 3,	abuse...Wow... This is definitely my favorite chapter so far. What an AWESOME interpretation of comsmic energy! I wouldn't be surprised at all if it was accurate to some degree! Great job, and if you don't write more, awesome ending!
Vanille Strawberry 2007-12-22 ch 3,	abuseour explanation seems very beliavable(sp?) I wouldn't be suprised if they used it on the show! Slan Vanille
nutshak 2007-12-22 ch 3,	abuseHell yeah that would be good as if you where a writer in season 4! dude this chapter was friggin awesome! you really know how to get inside the charectars head! keep it up!
MastaDrumma22 2007-12-21 ch 3,	abuseNICE! NICE! But what is Zuko going to do if Aang can go into the Avatar State already?
Loupami 2007-12-21 ch 3,	abuseWoah. The idea that Aang's chakra would be blocked because he didn't know that Katara felt the same way, that might actually be it, it makes perfect sense! I admire your ability to write confessions so differently, yet make them all seem plausible.
poka 2007-12-21 ch 3,	abuseThey finally got together! Would it be posible for you to explain how Zuko escaped the fire nation and why? I have to agree with katara. I know that she still thinks that something isn't right with him. Maybe you could prove us wrong...
Katara2102 2007-12-21 ch 3,	abuseThat was brilliant! That was a very good idea and i think it fit in perfectly. Squee The Kataang!! I love how you write kataang.It's so cute! Very nice chapter. Toph and Zuko do seem to have similar backrounds,don't they? I find that interesting.
DuHSPaZZiNGFeL 2007-12-21 ch 3,	abuseOH wow. That was amazingly done! The best chapter so far! Infact, that might very well be the loophole in the guru's explanation in the real storyline. I was kind of thinking about that, but you realy brought it to light! I loved their talk, and their first confessions..it was so well done.
cruciolicous 2007-12-21 ch 3,	abuselove it. please continue =).
ScorpioRed112 2007-12-21 ch 3,	abuseTo be honest with you, I only read the third chapter, but it was very well written! My only deal with this is that the characters seemed too...well, logical for me. I mean, they're really just kids if you look at it. And Aang and Katara seemed to be passing back information so quickly. Also, when Katara said "I love you" it just came out so...I don't know, abruptly. It was kind of weird, to be honest, and I went back and read it again. It seemed rushed. Anyway, besides the little OOCness, very nicely written and overall fairly plausable. Good job! :D -Scorpiored112

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