Brienne sighed. Fred and George sighed. Brienne glared at them, and they both smiled. Brienne sat back, clearly at a loss to what these boys were up to.

That scene was cute. I can just imagine the twins smiling...

You could have made her fail her first try of stupefy...
I mean, it's her first try, right?
It must be hard for her. But to perfect it...
And Lupin's trying to talk to her so desperately kind of turned me off.
But other than that, I didn't really hate it.

"...who was gulping down a large goblet of pumpkin juice."
I didn't know they can drink even before Dumbeldore is done with his speech.

Anyway, like this so far.
The delay of her meeting the twins is, for me, a good thing. :D
Looks promising.

I still don't have the slightest idea about her attitude but, after the 'bitterness' comment, I hope she's not a big emo.
And I believe that everyone has fear inside them. :)
And I hope she doesn't really smell of Beauxbatons attitude.
Not that I hate them but it's just a bit over-acting.
Good chapter. :D

I like the idea of you not introducing her immediately to the twins.
Not those cliche of the OC sitting with the twins in the same compartment.
It's getting kind of over-used.
It has potential. :D

um, isn't it expecto patronum for dementors?? not ridikkulus? cuz that's for boggarts

Noe! Update again it's been forever! ^^ I love this story!

I liked the way she didn't believe in the tarot cards but they still worked and told her future, I thought that was really good. I hope things start to happen soon, they're really getting good now!!
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cute..also, you must be really proud of yourself with this story. making other people flal in love with your own character is amazing and hard to do...and the fatc that i am now loning to know whats going on between george and brienne says youve done exactly that! i love it please continue!

aw! loved george and brienne at the begining!

I liked it, but I have to say I enjoyed lats chapter better. Very good job still though, please continue and go the way your going with George being a big confident, I think tis an awesome idea.

This...was...so...incredibly...catastrophically...awesomely...amazing! i love Fred and George!

aw that was sad! but i loved Fred and George at the bgining, I feel really bad for her, I really like Lupin though (always have) and you prtrayed him amazing! I could visualize this whole chapter! KUd0s

yah George next! haha, good job on this chapter.

I'm really enjoying this story a lot! maybe you could check out some of mine when you get a chance?

I loved it!! Your so good at this, it makes me want to cry!! Update soon, for the sake of my sanity!