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| AnGeL oF mAdNeSs 2008-07-28 ch 9,  | abuseThat was a really good story - do you think you could do a sequel? :D |
| EmpressOrientation 2008-02-20 ch 9, | abuseThis was an interesting read ^^ I like how you switched scenes by putting the state/city names on top; that was really in the spirit of Bourne movies, and made me picture scenes more easily. I wouldn't have minded some more insight into character's emotion, but it was good just the same :) |
| Jaythorne 2008-02-05 ch 9, | abuseOh my God that epilogue was just perfect... this whole story was utterly fantastic, and I'm sad to see it done, but nonetheless, it was a wonderful, brilliant, adventrous read! Thank you! :) |
| Frust-sheep 2008-02-05 ch 9, | abuseNice chapter Tigeress-10. I really liked the touch of humor ;) and I`m glad Jason is free and can live his life in the end. Good work. :) |
| Jaythorne 2008-01-31 ch 8, | abuseYAYAYAYAYAYAYAYAYAYA-- *gets smacked with a frying pan* Ahem, sorry. Loved it! (as usual) I can't wait for the next chapter... I love all the adventure Bourne gets himself into, and you are doing an outstanding job of devulging! XD ~Jay~ (_() Marshmellow. |
| Frust-sheep 2008-01-30 ch 8, | abuseGreat chapter and so full of action. You have a talent to describe this with so much suspense. Cool. :) And I`m glad they are ok. Cant`wait for the epilogue. :) |
| dobie1201 2008-01-27 ch 7, anon. | abuseI really like this story! Thanks for posting it and please write a new chapter soon! |
| Ali 2008-01-19 ch 3, anon. | abuseNice. First time I've enjoyed a Marie's Alive story. You have a fine way with using as few words as possible to describe an emotion -- it's very comforting. |
| Frust-sheep 2008-01-14 ch 7, | abuseCool chapter. :) I really like the relation between Marie and Nicky and then their interaction with Jason in the middle. *lol* More please. :) PS: I`m sorry, that you have problems with your laptop. |
| cryptographer 2008-01-03 ch 6, anon. | abuseI love the Bourne series and your stories are a logical continuation of my obsession! Please continue to update as quickly as you have! Love your writings! Ps. You have also inspired me! |
| Frust-sheep 2008-01-02 ch 6, | abuseThat was a great chapter again. It was full of action and I really liked it, that Nicky was the one, who fought. Also I think the clash between her and Marie was very in character, because I think Nicky would not show her jealousy right at the beginning. So really great job. :) |
| Jaythorne 2008-01-02 ch 6, | abuseMy heart was waging war against my ribs this whole chapter. (6th)Bravo! ^_~ |
| Frust-sheep 2007-12-30 ch 5, | abuseGreat chapter. :) Oh I think from now it becomes even more interesting. Cool. |
| Anim_ship 2007-12-29 ch 5, anon. | abuseWow, pretty good chapter, possibly one of your best one's yet! So I take this turning into Jason Marie instead of Nicky? |
| Jaythorne 2007-12-29 ch 5, | abuseThis is getting SO GOOD! I can't wait for da next chapter! XD |