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Reviews For: Danny can dance

LilMidget
2007-12-10
ch 1,
abuseI would have liked if you spent more time in the dance scene. What kind of music? what were the steps like? what did Danny do that was so shocking when he danced?
if that is the title of the story then you should stay with that theme.
ncisabbylover
2007-12-10
ch 1,
abusethis was cute i love it
twinkeyrocks
2007-12-10
ch 1,
abuseI read in your author's note that you hadn't updated because you were fat and lazy, and I was all what in the world@
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