This, and the art that goes with it is incredible.

Is there more to this story? Torio and Sand are my most favorite characters.

Just so you are aware. All right, enjoy.

Best. Line. Ever. *Cackle*
Your evilness makes me giddy.

A bit more M than I generally like but sorta funny in parts. A mental image of Sand saying 'talk dirty baby' keeps running through my head.

*giggle* Okay, so I will remain not a fan of Torio/Sand pairings. (This is the Aura that was bugging you on DA) I don't think I'll ever be a fan. But I must give you that this was quite the clever chapter and that while I might not rave for the couple you have convinced me that it's acceptable when put together correctly.

I have this mental image of Sand and Nevalle jabbering together like hens over tea though...

You were right i did enjoy the last two chapters, and i was very happy to see volume II :D

Keep this up

and no problem
i just wish i wrote as well as you

I used to read stories before i joined fanfiction and this is definately one of the very best i've read.

Hoping for updates soon

Hey, you decided to post :) I've already read it, as you know, and left comments on the yahoo group, but I just wanted to take this opportunity to tell you again that I loved your story. It's beautifully written, and has a lot of intriguing twists.

And though Sand/Torio is not a pairing that would normally catch my eye, you made it plausible and even made me love it. Great work :)

Oh, this looks very intriguing indeed. I'm a bit surprised not to have noticed a Sand/Torio fic before, since it is clear they have some form of history, at least regarding the Luskan connection, which isn't fully developed in the game.

I wasn't quite sure about this story at the very outset, as the '** with a pretty leash' comment seemed slightly over the top, reminding me more of Bishop's style than Sand's (usually) more subtle cattiness. However, the way you've moved the chapter on from that moment works extremely well. It's beautifully paced and the switches in perspective are not cumbersome or confusing. As a minor technical point there's a little problem with some italicised words running into the word which follows them, which might be a display problem with the site, but you've probably already noticed that. Good stuff, though, I've already added it as a fave story and look forward to reading more it.