Reviews for Killler In The City

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p. leoni 2008-07-19 ch 4, anon.	abuseGreat job Sammy, occasional mishaps in editing, but overall a very good, attention holding story line. Although I like Criminal Minds and CSI NY, I think the next story should be based on characters of your own imagination, clearly you have the talent to create your own TV or book series. I am excited to see where this story takes you. Even more excited to see where your own imagination will take you after this one is completed. Blessings baby, Keep up the good work!! PJL
ChristinaAngel 2008-07-11 ch 4,	abuseWow go Danni! That was a brilliant escape and I like how the team managed to talk to her. Also the clues about the unsub was very clever. THanks for updating!
Sue1313 2008-07-07 ch 4,	abuseReally good. I like the cross over with CSI NY. I love that Gideon is back to help. I hope he and Reid can find a moment at the end to talk together about his leaving. Hotch has know all along how to get in touch with him and has not told Reid. Not nice! I look forward to more.
mabelreid 2008-07-07 ch 4,	abuseWow... this was very exciting and worth the wait. I really like Danielle alot. I like the way you'ver written the two teams together. They all react to everything in the chapter as I would expect from an episode. That last paragraph had me sweating a bit. I hope they got something from the trace.
Leigh59 2008-07-07 ch 4,	abusegreat up date more please!
Animefreakkagome 2008-04-26 ch 3,	abuse-.~
Winchestergal78 2008-01-03 ch 3,	abuseOh yeah,he's definitely creepy! But that makes it all the better to read! I love how you have the characters down,and the way you have Garcia there for Morgan.. Its just fantastic! More soon please? I really cannot wait to find out what happens!! Suzi
B-Elanna 2008-01-03 ch 3,	abuseArgh that's it for now. I do like your unsub though. Unsubs are supposed to be creepy. I dont quite know why he's killing them yet and why he is so interested in Morgan and the BAU all of the sudden. Doesnt quite fit the profile of the other vics ;) Keep up the good work, am looking forward to reading the next chapter - good luck with kicking ur sis of the pc.
B-Elanna 2008-01-03 ch 1,	abuseHeya, nice ficcie. I really enjoy the gracia/morgan hints. There are quite some grammar mistakes though, or at least some words missing, which sometimes make the sentences quite confusing. But I know what it's like when u enjoy writing a ficcie you just cant stop typing hahah. Up to the next chap for me :D
bahjcb 2008-01-02 ch 3, anon.	abuseI like your Morgan/Garcia moments. Since you already know your unsub's creepy, I'm not going to meantion that. :)
mabelreid 2008-01-02 ch 3,	abuseI really like the nice long chapters you write for us. It was great to have Gideon back helping Derek to cope with this. I like his sister. She's tough and I like the pre-established relationship they seem to have and how it comes through to the reader in little moments. So Hawkes is dating Danielle I know this is a huge drama and a scary thing for her, but I think the potential for humor is pretty high when you think about how Derek will react to finding that little piece of info out. Yeah, I don't really like this un-sub but as you say he isn't meant to be nice and cuddly.
mabelreid 2007-12-31 ch 2,	abuseDanny looked utterly disappointed at the newly found candy, “She’s been holding out on us. I swear I ask her for candy everyday. She always tells me she’s got nothing.” “She shares with me and Stella,” Lindsay smiled at Danny. Hehehehe I can just see the look on Danny's face. Wow that was so sad, first she gone and now she's sick, poor Morgan. I'm glad that Garcia is there for him. I don't like this un-sub at all, what is his deal?
mabelreid 2007-12-31 ch 1,	abuseI wish I had gotten into this sooner. I like that Morgan seems to be the focal point of this with his sister being one of the victims. I was thrilled to see the crossover with CSI NY too. I love that show as well.
bahjcb 2007-12-16 ch 2,	abuseWow, you're not going to let Morgan have a moment of peace, are you? I really like how Garcia is helping him through this. Of course, your unsub is really, really creepy. Good job with that! I never guessed how you were going to connect the victims. That was an interesting curve ball. Great job!
Poisonchik88 2007-12-15 ch 1,	abuseGarcia being there for Morgan was just too cute.. Well, needless to say you got me hooked not to mention curious.. With that said .. I hope you update soon !! :) Can't wait for the next chapter.. D.

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