Ohh! I think your sister meant Dresden City in Germany. I have that exact same city in my group's story [doujinshi] as part of a character background.

I was actually resisting the urge to review because I know this'll probably not get read in a while, of course I understand the hiatus and its nature - but I look forward to finishing this story. Heehee. ^_^

This is what I like to call a Princess Tutu original! I love your story! You're doing an amazing job, and your ideas are fresh and grand! I love all your new characters (except for carrot-top...I mean Jaegar (sorry about the nickname ^^;)...he hasn't done anything to gain my approval as of yet, but I can be patient:)) Good luck with your next update, I'll be waiting for it! This story is one of those that has me really excited and enthusiastic (I may have done a few crazy antics while reading this ^^;)
(P.S.: I really liked some of those story ideas you mentioned before. They made me want to read them *pouts*)
(P.P.S: I personally think Lillie would think of Femio in pain as cute XD, I have trouble seeing her with Mytho because I think she and Femio are just adorable!)

Finally an update!
Tat is so great!
Even though it was a little late.
but it was definitely worth the wait.
Okay..no, maybe I over-exaggerate.

Cuz really, who likes de process of waiting?
For a story so intriguing, yet slow in progressing..
But I don't want to be putting any pressure,
I'd hate to be ruining fanfiction treasure.
Make sure u have fun and do ur best
Cuz I will NOT stand for anything less.

Lots of luv from dis reviewer. <3
I hope ur next chappie will arrive more sooner ~ ;D
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Ack! I'm such a bad poet.
The whole world knows it.

Don't worry I'll stop now.

Lovely~!I love your plot twists~! Update soon pwease~:DD

I like the story idea cursed. Anywho...YAY! I really like this story

Hm...things are really heating up.

Hate to tell you this fakir, but you need Elsie. Much like you needed Ahiru in the first place. And somehow things are going to be so much worse when Ahriu becomes curious again. After all, she was clueless at the best of times!

Any issues with rushing (which I really didn't mind until you pointed it out :D) magically go away in my mind because you updated so quickly. This is good for you, and me, if not for the company I was going to buy all that honey from. I can tell I'm really getting into this so far, because I'm having daydreams about the story. They most consist of cuddling emotionless Ahiru and Elsie with one hand (hey, I'm attached to an OC!) and strangling Jaegar with the other. I'm not even sure if cuddling two people with one hand/arm is possible, but I'll find a way for the sake of obsessive love. <3 Ooh, one question though, what do the chapter titles mean? Just to re-point out something another reviewer said, it'll be hilarious if and when Ahiru gets her curiosity shard. 'I wonder what that shiny thing at the bottom of that deep, dark hole is? Poor Fakir.

cute i liked this chapter...im looking forward to seeing what ahiru acts like when she gets her shard of curiosity back!

Hey~ I'm happy to know you've started writing again, and that you've reappeared!! I missed you! <3 Nice chapter, really, but I'll have to reread the whole story to get a better understanding of it!
I hope you guys are all well!
*hugs you tight*

Welp, so far you have me hooked! You can tell because I haven't used my free time to do anything but read this since I found it last night. I love how you're tying everything in with questions left unanswered in the series, most of them questions I didn't realize I had until reading this. One of the things I love most about this story is that you stayed true to that certain feel the characters had, and while I don't care all that much about the OCs just yet, I'm certainly interested in them. I love the fact that they're not just there to conveniently fill in plot holes. They get just as much love as the cannon characters do. I find it interesting how much character depth Kaethe not wanting to be developed adds. Oh the sweet and complex irony. You still have me stewing what exactly the little fairy tale at the beginning means. I'm all confuzzled! Congrads, that isn't an easy feat. The only criticism I have is that every once in a while there's a run on sentence, but I usually end up subconsciously fixing those anyway, so I don't really mind. Update soon! (If you don't I may be forced to show you the full force of my wrath. This would be bad for me too, because I don't know where I'm going to get all that honey...)

this story isnt immature at all! :D it's one of my favorite ff reads at the moment, thanks for submitting a new chapter! *v*

I'm not too fond of the Princess Tutu fics that basically do the story all over again nor am I too fond of OCs but I have to say that your story is AMAZING. I absolutely love it. And I love Mikhail so much

hey! your story is great! I just finished watching princess tut this weekend, and I was so sad about Fakia and Ahiru! so I looked to see if there were any fics about them and voaila! Your story is great, very entertaining and very well written, though there are a couple things that could be better. I'd be happy to help you fix them, or to at least make some suggestions if you want. Let me Know. Also I saw your profile, so sorry about your house! it must be awful. I hope it all gets better soon. best wishes

serafina

so this is one of the most interesting plots so far. i am thankful, you have talent & quite an imagination. however it might be too imaginative: we (or maybe just me) are confused. you have invovled too many parties in this story.
first Heidi & Kreathe (shouldn't they be the same person) as princess raven.
2nd Drago & Jaegar: Jaegar is a knight? only fakir should be the knight!
Then there is mikhael- he does not add anything to the plot, u could have easily but Fakir & Autor together to give way to the same humor.
With this wealth of characters i only hope that you know exactly what you r doing. i just would like you to be aware of our confusion.
u truly have brought chaos. i think that was your goal

What impresses me most about this fic is that, if they were to make more of Princess Tutu, THIS is what it would be like. Almost exactly. It's creepy how well you've got even Ahiru, who's maasively OOC, to be so... IC.

And as for the OCs... They have to be the best OCs I've read that aren't in an orignal story. I hate the character's I'm supposed to hate, and love the characters I should love. Kaethe is my favorite out of all of them, with Mikhail coming in at a close second.

I also love how you give Princess Tutu herself her own character and personality. I haven't gotten to see enough of the show yet, but you've got her just like I imagine she would act like.

All over, you've got this fic down. Can't wait to see what's coming.