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| AT Fan 2008-03-22 ch 1, | abuseThis story is awesome. Reminds me of Waiting for Godot or 1984. Caring it seems is either in someone's nature or not. This almost reminds me of the Matrix as well do you accept the false reality or do you seek the truth even if it is unpleasant.Are you willing to sacrefice yourself for the greater good or even just to save an innocent life. This would have made an excellent episode. Great job. |
| lealea 2008-01-20 ch 1, | abuseOmg! i just found this lil gem of a story and i loved it! it was in character (well i think so) it had the right amount of humor not to mention the lil bit of horror to it, which i just loved! thanks for the great story and i hope you keep writing! Lea.x |
| frany66 2007-12-13 ch 1, | abuseI loved it, really really. I can see it being the story of an actual episode almost... |
| Mystic-Dragon-chick 2007-12-12 ch 1, | abuseOMG wow i love his story i could soo see it as an episode! well done. MDC |
| Harm Marie 2007-12-11 ch 1, | abuseI just have to say "wow." |
| sgtat 2007-12-11 ch 1, | abuseWell put. |
| sez101 2007-12-11 ch 1, | abusewow you are right is is weird, you ask would i make that choice, brilliant story very powerful and thought provoking |