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Goomba
2008-09-16
ch 1,
abuseOhh if only we knew-would you ever consider sharing. For this much coin perhaps? (offers up some coin) OR is it more expensive information than that? (offers more coin) Well-what say you?

Anyhow that was cute, and a great easy read, thanks.
Cheers Jen
Whirlwind421
2008-09-08
ch 1,
abuseI don't care if Cameron doesn't get to know but I really want to know!! Great story!
Harm Marie
2007-12-11
ch 1,
abuseVery good. It's funny that Daniel's attempt to get them out of the mess kinda made it worse.
nonhalema
2007-12-11
ch 1,
abuseFunny love it
7 League Boots
2007-12-10
ch 1,
abuseNice! Very original; slavers aren't usually grist for humor but you got me smiling here. Good character and voices. Loved the cat burglary Sam! And Cam had my favorite line: "You've gone and made yourself expensive." Sweet, when would he ever get to say that! As for the slaver's last remarks that threats of death won't drag out of Daniel, I think I get the idea. Pervert. LOL!
Great story, thanks!
Eilidh17
2007-12-10
ch 1,
abuseThat was great. Love the last line!
Giesbrecht
2007-12-10
ch 1,
abuseI love that parting bit. It's always funnier to leave the joke up to the audience's imagination.
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