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| Goomba 2008-09-16 ch 1, | abuseOhh if only we knew-would you ever consider sharing. For this much coin perhaps? (offers up some coin) OR is it more expensive information than that? (offers more coin) Well-what say you? Anyhow that was cute, and a great easy read, thanks. Cheers Jen |
| Whirlwind421 2008-09-08 ch 1, | abuseI don't care if Cameron doesn't get to know but I really want to know!! Great story! |
| Harm Marie 2007-12-11 ch 1, | abuseVery good. It's funny that Daniel's attempt to get them out of the mess kinda made it worse. |
| nonhalema 2007-12-11 ch 1, | abuseFunny love it |
| 7 League Boots 2007-12-10 ch 1, | abuseNice! Very original; slavers aren't usually grist for humor but you got me smiling here. Good character and voices. Loved the cat burglary Sam! And Cam had my favorite line: "You've gone and made yourself expensive." Sweet, when would he ever get to say that! As for the slaver's last remarks that threats of death won't drag out of Daniel, I think I get the idea. Pervert. LOL! Great story, thanks! |
| Eilidh17 2007-12-10 ch 1, | abuseThat was great. Love the last line! |
| Giesbrecht 2007-12-10 ch 1, | abuseI love that parting bit. It's always funnier to leave the joke up to the audience's imagination. |