I really enjoyed this story!! keep it up.

Wonderful!

So Good. She got her man. And just enough sex to make it intrusting. After all I am 71 and don't need to get into to many details. Thats why I enjoyed this so much.

Gah, *shakes head* Sam is such a b!tch.

just wanted to let you know I am still reading

thank GOD, you don't like Sam either. Yes!

oh she is so ** at Jason. She is going to get so drunk. lol
Now her talking to Carly. lmfao. that was great

Her little damsel in distress bit was fantastic. You have the banter between them... perfect.

this chapter is utterly hillarious. Elizabeths descriptions of how she and Carly interact are right on. I cannot wait to see what kind of interactions you have them in. And Sonny and his 'husband' voice. OMG HILLARIOUS.

~ Bella

your descriptives are fantastic. I just found this story and I think it is really cute. Can't wait to read the rest.

~ Bella

that was an awesome story. i absolutely love it.

I read this yesterday in one fell swoop. I started and could not put the book down. This is truly good writing. I loved the way the first chapter started and then honestly finished in chapter 13.

You have a talent that you should probably try to hone more for profit than pleasure. I fell you could probably get somewhere.

I did, however, find it so funny that you took such liberties with the character of Jason...you making him have a string of one night stands was something I chuckled at simply because Jason would probably rather become a monk than sleep with anyone and everyone.

I also truly enjoyed how you brought Max into it as Liz's friend and confidante. I could really see that. If only the writers of GH would read some of your work to get some ideas.

Again, thank you for your wonderful writing. When I came looking for you to review this one and Life's Lemons, I was very please to see many more that I will soon be reviewing too.

I hope you don't mind the critique. I just don't think it is healthy to receive all + and nothing negative. Where do you learn from rainbows and sunshine. You learn from the clouds and the rain.

Honestly, I thought this was an amazing story. Even though it was a different history you still captured the essence of the characters and there were very few typos which can be very distracting to the flow. I especially liked when she was leaving the hotel room and he said he'd regret it if they had slept together. The way you led up to that moment and the delivery was so good I actually got choked up and felt for both of them. Excellent work and I hope to read more.