This was very somber, and very tranquil. The way you wrote it accompanies those moods very well, I think. The flower mentions and anecdotes throughout the drabble are a very nice touch, giving the whole a reminscent, sparkly feeling to it.

Yes, sparkly.

I don't think I've read anything focusing on the sisterly bonds between Menardi and Karst, or for that matter, anything involving much of them at all really. I think this was a great tribute to some of the unsung characters in the game and was surpringly deep for something written in only twenty minutes. Well done. ^^

Very good. I've always liked the Proxians.

The flower symbolises how they feel about their parents? Sweet touch!

Nice job. I don't think I've ever read a Menardi first-person fic; the Proxians tend to not get as much love. I hadn't thought of the Puelle connection before, kudos on finding that.