Beautiful story! Thanks for sharing it with us.

Okay. So uh... wow. XD

First off, I really really admire you for having the ability of making your readers tear up (yes, including me). I couldn't help but cry for Bella. She had gone through so so much yet she was still standing firm. I love the way you portrayed a headstrong Bella. You really did give justice to her character. Not that that excludes the other characters - I sure am contented with the personality of Edward and the others. :)

Second, the plot. This story of yours has a depth that I can't explain. It's like a whirlwind of emotions kept hovering over Bella and couldn't seem to calm down any longer. Although I have a few complaints. Like the Twilight series, your Bella is very much like a Mary-Sue character. She's too... perfect. Sure, I did say I like how you portrayed her but sometimes, I couldn't help but think: Bella is so selfless, can't she make mistakes once in a while? But then again, her hesitancies could be her very own mistakes. Lol. Am I making any sense? XD Oh well.

Third, the flow of your story. As much as I like your work, I'd often found myself wishing for the story to end. I'd often take a look at how many chapters left before it's done then I'd be disappointed if there's still more. You see, the plot line is exciting until Bella had finished narrating her life story to the Cullens. After that, it was still good (I mean, after all, I also wanted to see how Bella got her own happy ending). But when it came to the moment that Bella and Edward finally tossed away their stubbornness, I felt that I'm not interested much longer. Yet I still I finished it anyway. I don't really want to leave things unfinished. XD So... yeah. My interest fell apart from that point on. Don't get me wrong. I like how you write. You have a way with words and an incredible vocabulary to boot. You could very well write a novel if you're willing to!

Well, that's all. It's been an amazing roller coaster ride and I never regretted joining the reading bandwagon. Thanks for the good read. You did a very awesome work, indeed.

Write more!

Yours truly,

Hazel

Wow! I LOVED this story! I love how Bella didn't easily forgive Edward and got to admit to and express her anger at him for leaving. I love that Alice comfronted the family for their part in leaving Bella and hurting her. I love the Cocktails with Claire chapters. I love the character of Grace and I love that Edward brought her back into Bella's life!

Thank you for writing this wonderful story and I hope that continue to write more amazing pieces of work!

Wow...I did think story was dragging on a bit but the ending (as in last ten - fifteen chapters) was so worth it! Wish there was a honeymoon chapter but otherwise great story :)

I really enjoyed reading this story. Thank you so much for writing.

Keep writing! :)

You know what's missing in this story? Bella. NO ONE thinks of her, really thinks of her.

Edward didn't look for her, he just ran into her and decided, "Wow, she's a vampire and I don't have to feel bad! Yay! I'll kiss her and she'll love me again."

The Cullens are the same. NO ONE seems to think, "Wow. She's a vampire because of OUR actions; how much she must hurt." Just, "How do we get her back so WE can feel good about ourselves again?"

Well, Alice is half right. The blame belongs to ALL of them. So why did she leave when she knew it was wrong?

I'm really bugged by their attitude that "Bella's a vampire, so she should quit angsting over the fact that WE left her to OUR enemy."

Edward's telling her he didn't love her is the LEAST of his sins, in a way. They LEFT her knowing that Victoria could be a danger to her! They didn't go back and check on her (after her wedding).

Funny how the Cullens can't get the idea that THEY are the reason for Bella's suffering. Hello? THEY abandoned her to Victoria. How about WATCHING Bella instead of running around the world looking for her if they thought she was after Bella!

They seem to conveniently cleanse their consciences when they don't like the thought that someone might have reason to be upset with them. "Oh, Bella's back and a vampire and WE didn't change her! How convenient for US!"

How wonderful! I really enjoyed this fiction and stole away every moment I could to read it. I laughed, I cried and sighed. A most engaging and wonderful story. Thank you!

Wow! What a great story! The last two chapters had me on the edge of my seat. Can't wait to read more! I'm so enjoying this. You really caught the tone and texture of Twilight. Thanks!

Just found this story. How interesting! Can't wait to read more. Thank you!

Okay... Soo... I love the writing... The story... But not so much Bella. I have never wanted to slap someone soo silly! A little redemption here.

Such a wonderful story! I'm so glad you were able to finish it. I really liked when they all showed up in the cars to let her pick which one to barrow. I was so cute when Edward was telling Bella that Grace thought he was handsome. I liked how he kept putting off asking her to marry him. Thank you for sharing your story.

I just finished reading the story in one day. I absolutely love it! I really should have been studying for my major exams tomorrow, but I don't care. Your story was well worth it !

Amazing story! Absolutely loved it! Great writing great plot and very unique :) one of the best :D