Ah, yes! I love it.

KYA! So cute! ^^

Spottedstar106

>3< so cute! It's really good for a first death note fic!

Aw, isn't L the sweetest thing :3
OK, reading about him rolling on the floor reminds me of my little sister when she used to throw tantrums in shops to have something (but with Ryuzaki it's adorable), the thumb sucking was uber cute, the "you're not my father" kawai to no end, but by the butt-patting i was about to think you were going to make him wear diapers or something XD
Loved it, faved it :3

I'ma jump on the bandwagon and agree that this is THE cutest thing EVER. From the first time I saw him, L reminded me of a child. Always. And he's so adorably vulnerable with an undistinguishable cold/flu type thing going on.

It's just like. So cute. L and Light's relationship in this is just like... perfect. ♥

You did a really good job. And that illness you described? IT SOUNDS FREAKING AWFUL. I would have DIED. =/ The worst illness I've ever had is pneumonia...and I was five.

You're such an excellent writer; I really enjoyed this. :D

Aw, so cute! If L and Light were still alive, maybe they really could be friends like in this fic
Wonderful story!
«Bouncefox»

Cute!

AAW THAT WAS SO CUTE! ^_^ GOOD JOB XD

Oh, that's so sweet. I love stories that make Raito the caring daddy and L the adorable, yet childish workaholic.

It sounds disgusing, I'm so glad my family is clueless. Anyway, very creative, and has a nice flow, I give it a ten out of ten and a place on the favorites list.

-LadySorrow

aw it was so cute!! the series needs to be more like this! great job!

awhh super super cute!

this reminds me of an home-medicine i use.you take the juice of 1 lime,a teaspoon of honey,and a shot of whiskey,mix,and drink.it'll knock you out,but when you wake up,your more or less cured.if i were L then,i would be more freaked out by Raito touching my **,even if he were trying to make me feel better.

That was pretty cute! I did have some slight problems with the description of L's illness...it really didn't seem bad enough to be the flu--the flu knocks you out. There would be no room for denying that he was sick, and he probably wouldn't just have a slight fever. Really, he didn't seem that sick, here. It sounded like he had a cold. So I think it might have been better if you changed the illness or changed the symptoms. But that was really one of the only problems. I liked the phrase 'diagnosed as a genius', as if that too is an illness--it certainly would have its drawbacks. Anyway, great job.

Wow... this was really cute.