you are such a great WRITER, there is no one else in the whole world who writes like you do. I'm so impressed, and can't wait for the next chapter in the Spires of Altihex.

its only fair on him to keep this private. i wouldn't want to tell anyone much either...

AWESOME STORY!!

this story is fascinating. I can't wait to read more of it.

Commander Starscream ALWAYS has an unextinguishable spark! He shall NEVER die! MUhahahahahaha!

Wow. I stayed up so late reading this last night, lol, but it was so worth it. This has to be one of the best fanfics I've read in a long time - excellent job!

Omg, I love this story to pieces - excellent job! I shall enjoy reading the rest of these chapters. :D

Whe I love it! Getting inside Starscream's head and showing his motivations - his emotions - was a fantastic touch. Great writing style too; I like the multiple viewpoints. Especially frustrating - in a good way! - was the uncertainty of knowing immediately who was talking... and the sudden switch to Ratchet at the end!

Keep up the good work; I'm on lookout for the sequel! ;)

WoW! What a nice story! And cute couple! I'm going to read sequel!

Your characterization of Starscream is perfect, the unbalanced nature and frentic energy, constant scheming and his ability to convince himself that whatever he wants in any given moment is warranted and only adds to his brilliance XD The progression of interaction between the two was convincing and plausible.

Wonderful job :)

This looks very interesting!

Wow. I think I can genuinely say that this is my favorite slashfic I came across. Granted, I may have a bit of a bias towards those two specifically and sticking them together in unlikely situation, but damn, this was just HOT. I actually ran through the whole damn thing in one sitting all the way up til like 4:00 AM. Heartens me strangely to see others playing with this odd couple, and moreover keeping them so wonderfully in character! Generally that's my problem with much slash- it so often doesn't work in terms of the characters. But you allowed Starscream to keep his sociopathic selfishness as well as not allowing Percy to be a doormat. Kudos!

The only concrits I have are to watch for redundancy and passive voice. I also noticed a few times a tendency for "'Dialogue.' Was the adjective verbal noun", which is generally considered weaker than "'Dialogue' verbed X."

Other than that, hot stuff! Shall be watching the next one!

This fic is absolutely amazing! It had me hooked-up enough to stay up all night to finish reading because of the intriguing turn of events and the perfect flow of the story. When reading the first chapters, I thought that there was no way how that relationship could possibly work out, but you totally pulled it off (and in style!).

Kudos for keeping Starscream in-character so nicely, and keep up the good work! (I'll be reading it! ;) )

I loved it. It was a long journey from absolute hatred, to a disgruntled acceptance. I'm not a mechy (if such a thing actually exists), but, well, let's say the intimacy was worded well.
The lack of the over-used cliche of a perfect, happy, and understanding ending was appreciated, for sure.

Loved this story, it's taken several evenings and lunchtimes at work to finish it-i couldn't 'put it down',lol! My colleague James read some over my shoulder and accused me of reading 'Transformers **' LMAO! ...And long may it and this unexpectedly sweet and complex partnership continue!

really enjoying this, hoping to read the rest this week!