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mightywoman 2008-05-28 ch 1,	abusesqueals with pent up joy You're amazing! Seriously I've been trying to write a story like this for awhile now, trying to get Booths feelings on paper, and you did it perfectly! I could totally SEE him in this piece, his emotions playing on his face as he waited "patiently" for his partner, best friend and soon to be lover. It made my heart warm up to the whole B/B thing :D The last line was amazing though now I'm wanting more more more! MM.
Rebeca Maria 2008-02-15 ch 1,	abuseOMG! XD Booth is so cute! "It takes everything in me not to run because we kissedand even though you don’t know it yet, tonight we’re going to do it again." I really loved the way you finished this. Cute. Cute. Cute. XD
DaLiza 2008-01-19 ch 1,	abuseBeautifully written. LOVED it! Favorite lines: --I want to see you lose control Temperance and I want you to lose it in my bed. --I ran, I took cold showers, I masturbated like a teenager with a new Sports Illustrated Swimsuit edition but it was like putting a Band-Aid on a hemorrhaging wound. Wanting you is going to kill me. -- I promised myself I would stop finding reasons to touch you but I broke it again and again. The feel of your smooth skin underneath my fingers is more of an addiction than my gambling ever was. I ache to fill my palms with you. --Waiting, waiting, waiting, I’m so tired of waiting, but that’s over now. Life is about to get very merry. --It takes everything in me not to run because we kissed and even though you don’t know it yet, tonight we’re going to do it again.
Cora Clavia 2007-12-31 ch 1,	abuseReally, really good! Love the intensity, and how you slide back into visual focus at the end. Great job.
heatherberry 2007-12-29 ch 1,	abuseReally enjoyable...I loved the line "Well I make steps and so far you haven’t dropped me." Cracking read!
vampiratelycan 2007-12-28 ch 1,	abuseBrilliant, this writing style is so similar to my writing style in my english essays that I think I was just drawn in. Its almost like I could see Booths anguish on his face. Brill job, well done. Loved it.
tracgyrl 2007-12-21 ch 1,	abuseI LOVED this insight into what Booth is thinking as he waits for Brennan! AMAZING characterization!
LittleDru 2007-12-19 ch 1, anon.	abuseAw! I loved that! It was so sweet. It's great to see a fic with Booth's thoughts about the kiss. I about died when he realized her gum was in his mouth! I laughed myself silly! "I have things to do...with Bones!" LOL RIGHT
Ronata 2007-12-15 ch 1,	abusewonderfully written, i wish there was more. thanks
squintsquad03 2007-12-15 ch 1,	abuseloved it. I like Booth's perspective and descriptions.
amobd 2007-12-14 ch 1,	abuseThat was amazingg! Because who didn't wonder what was going through his mind when he was so dazed from the kiss.You wrote the perfect answer to my question :-) And the storm of feelings inside him felt totally real and so Booth-like, intense, diverse, powerful. The way the flames on his skin mirror the sensations inside, wow! I liked how you mentioned his fascination with her eyes :-) And how he remembered all they lived together and how everything brought them closer and closer together. How every time he felt her slip away because of cases, of boyfriends only brought him closer to that line. And how he rememberes every time they touched! You made me instantly think of that dark, intense look in his eyes that is there whenever they touch and how he always tried to fight it back. "You said we’d have our own Christmas when you got home well I have it all waiting. There’s a tree up at your apartment and your gifts are waiting underneath it. Dinner is in the oven waiting to be heated up and a Christmas cd is already in your stereo waiting to be played. Waiting, waiting, waiting, I’m so tired of waiting, but that’s over now. Life is about to get very merry. Finally, I can see you, finishing up as you come through the check point. You look amazing Temperance. It takes everything in me not to run because we kissedand even though you don’t know it yet, tonight we’re going to do it again." I could feel all his energy, all the wishes and emotions in this ending, powerfull and you made me see him so vividly, fidgeting all over, trying not to run to her :-) Totally sweet and mesmerising :-) Can i ask for a continuation? All that energy has to go somewhere :-p
kmmp99 2007-12-14 ch 1,	abuseWOW! Absolutely perfect!
Hawaianangelgirl 2007-12-13 ch 1,	abuseWOW! Wonderful job! The description is just amazing!! I could really picture Booth waiting for her at the airport and all I wanted was hims to run and kiss her hard!! No second part intended? I'd die to read it!
labsquint 2007-12-13 ch 1,	abuseThis piece is a very nice introspective look inside Booth's head; a very in character moment in time reflecting where his thoughts might be at the end of Santa in the Slush. I liked the way you used the flame analogy as an image of his feelings for Brennan and then expanded on it when you described it as "small sparks that flickered from that first moment we met and slowly smoldered until they burst into tiny flames that spread and licked along my skin". Very descriptive and effective. Their relationship is covered as a nice retrospective, right from the first case, through the years, through the Sully months and then to the present time. His lists of all that he knows of her, how he knows so intimately, knowing all of Brennan's little likes and foibles really shows how intertwined they've become in each other's lives. This was not how they may have initially intended their relationship to be, meaning strictly on a professional level, but hey are far, FAR past that now. Booth's feelings over Brennan's relationship with Sully are very poignant. This line most shows to me where Booth's feelings really were at that point and I think you've really got it nailed here: "What kept me up at night then was the realization that I didn’t just want you to be happy; I wanted you to be happy with me." And then his feelings for Brennan sexually that he had tried to keep tamped down and hidden -- very subtly hot! Oh course, it is your writing and you do excel at that very thing, but you have him being deadly honest with himself, if no one else. This was particularly effective: "I want to see you lose control Temperance and I want you to lose it in my bed." There is a world of possibilities in that single line. But now, following that kiss, he has decided that the line will well and truely be crossed, maybe even that night. He's gone to a lot of trouble to make things perfect for her, when Brennan tends to escapse at Christmas time to avoid the feeling that she has no one to share Christmas with. He's going to show her that this year she does have someone to share it with. What a guy! I really enjoyed this fic. It's a natural corollary to the end of that episode and while the writers will not be taking the story in this direction, it is very in character and it certainly is one of the ways it could have gone. Thanks for sharing it with us. It does leave one wondering though, if you have any plans on continuing and filling us in on what happened once they met at the airport? :)
danireed 2007-12-12 ch 1,	abuseYou did a great job with this fic. i really love that it was Booth POV. you had some funny lines and really love the end.

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