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Reviews For: The Packing List

Manzana
2008-01-15
ch 1,
abuseI always liked that version of her finding out better. I think its the way he changes.
Makokam
2007-12-16
ch 1,
abuseI don't like where this is going AT ALL. This can only lead to bad things...

Makokam out.
CamFan4Ever
2007-12-12
ch 1,
abuse*Snickers* Wicked.
Wahoogal06
2007-12-11
ch 1,
abuseYES! You hinted at the Donner Cut reveal! Yes! Woohoo!

Great little fic-let here. I loved how you really got into Lois' head as she was in the shower scrubbing the watermelon seeds out, then as she was trying to decide who she was packing for: herself, Superman or Clark. It was really very detailed an authentic.

Still though, my favorite part is her going back for the gun. Go Lois! Ha ha ha ha... =D
MoriahThePariah
2007-12-11
ch 1,
abuseHA! I love how delightfully sinister it ends. Only with Lois and Clark would a gunshot herald the start of a deeper relationship. :p Crazy kids.

Hilarious little ficlet, like popping a single meringue cookie. Muah!
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