lol i liked the little things at begining and end

nice story but team 9 (Gai) was still in circulation when team 7 was being formed.

This is really good...I would make you fan art...but I fail at drawind and you deserve something high quality.

awsome

ba next ch or by the power of the gr workers progam i think we get the next ch now

i got the theam song

i can give it a try what did you have in mind for the artwork?

must have more *skin peels off and catches on fire* Itachi and Kisame your both gulty look into my eyes

Hooray for Writing skillz!

(Sorry for the n00b-ish 'Z')

Ja Ne, Force 'Hog, The Chocolate Milk Massiah

Go to deviantart. com Some there may be able to help you.

cool fic

oh...so this is the revised version...i like this one better *grins* for the change in plot mostly.

Nice story, please update

Down with shark fins! I am a good shark, not a mindless eating machine. If I am to change this image, I must first change myself. Fish are friends, not food.

same as the other fic