This chapter was pretty funny, probably more so than the last one, lol. Though, I'm very fond of the awkward, fluff moments, which you seem to write very well.

Rinoa really needs to her mind out of the gutter, doesn't she? Though, I can't say I blame her... the fantasy part was my favorite scene. The nosebleed addition made me laugh also.

Don't get discouraged by the lack of reviews, btw. People will eventually pay attention once you write more chapters. Your writing style flows well and I like your portrayal of Squall and Rinoa.

Very encouraging beginning. I particularly liked the opening battle scene. One of the better accounts I've seen of the Ultimecia battle, albeit it was a little short.

I like your style, it's crisp and delivers the progress of the story well. I liked Rinoa's little fantasy too, heh.

Haha oh god the nosebleed part made me crack up. Poor Rinoa.

Anyways nice update and keep it up!

(Also, you'll get more reviews in time, I've noticed alot of story's havent been getting as much reviews as usual.Just wait and keep updating and I'm sure you'll have lots)

Wow I'm a bit shocked there isnt alot of reviews too, I really like this so far, the bouncing part was pretty funny(poor Squall 8D).

Keep it up!

I'm surprised that no one's reviewed this it's an awesome take on the FF8's ending for your beginning chapter. I came across this accidentally when I was browsing the newly updated fics and I saw your username so I clicked on it, figuring that it was the fic you've been talking to me about.

Boy. I must say that I'm in love with your use of adjectives and language in general(that wasn't sarcasm, by the way). You just don't see that much effort put into these elements now-a-days. I think you've got me hooked on that element alone.

Now I can't say much about the actual chapter, seeing as it's a retelling, what I can say is that I really, really like the summary you put in for this. It makes all of the things you've been trying to explain to my thick skull very clear. It's almost remincent of Ashbear's Dancing in Time, only with differences as to what tests Squall and Rinoa's newfound relationship. Needless to say- I like. Hehe.

Anywho, I sincerly hope you continue this and if you need any help idea-wise, I don't mind at all. :)

-Emerald_Latias