I love this story havent read it since tarnished I forgotten how much Id enjoyed it hope you find time to continue this ^^

All right, so I just finished rereading this little epic here beginning with "Phantom Codewalker". I checked the last time I reviewed for this story. It was over three years ago. I'm thinking to myself, goddamn, that was a long time ago. And yet I still love and remember most of what happened in these stories and I'm still craving for more. I guess it's the uniqueness of your plot and the rare coupling of Takeru and Ken. I know it's been a while since you last updated, but because the story remains so vividly in my mind, it doesn't feel like it's been over three years.

I really, really do hope you continue soon, though. Your stories are among the best when it comes to the Kenkeru pairing and I love them sincerely. And there's so much left unattended! I want to know what happens! xD

When I read these stories now, I feel like I understand a lot more than I did when I read them initially. I guess it's because I'm actually analyzing the details more and not just skimming through in wild excitement. But the basic questions are stil the same. What the heck is Ken going to do about Takeru, what exactly is going to happen to our blond in regards to the Dark Seed, and what do those nasty little scientists have in store for him, if anything at all besides observing? Of course, there are also other little inquiries, but those are my main ones.

I must say, though, I am a little disappointed in Ken. I certainly wouldn't have been as passive as him if I found out my lover was heading down the same path of destruction as I did years before. I understand it's pretty much pointless to try to convince Takeru otherwise, but Ken resigned a little too quickly for my tastes. But, eh, we'll see what happens. Hopefully. That's the key word here, isn't it? :P Oh wells. I've written far too much already. But here's wishing for you to continue this brilliant tale before I go bite my nails off. (I don't bite my nails, by the way, so that just goes to show how agitated I am at this story's state of incompleteness.) Cheers, and I hope to see more of this in the future sometime. :]

Hi I've been reading your story for the past few years now. When are you goning to have the next chapter out? I hope its soon cuze this story is to god to just cut it off now.

Whoa, you are a very talented writer! This story is just...very awesome! I cant wait for the rest of story, to see how the Chosen deal with Takeru and such, so when you have the chance, hopefully soon, update okay?

that was good. i want more.

Great chapter, Ajora. Wonderfully written. Good old Osamu, too. :)

Nice portrayal of Osamu.

Where was Savali during the whole rescue?

~lets out breath~ man, that was intense!! It was made even more scarier by the fact that I was listening to "Family Affair" while I was reading. Seemed to make the mood a little more scary........even though it probably wasn't meant to.....~shudder~
Story was really cool, though. I love the way you set the mood and everything. Very descriptive and detailed, too. I also love the way you describe things. Really cool!

(GASPS) You updated! OMG, so much has happened! KEN FOUND OUT! You'd GOT to update soon! PLEASE!

Geuna~

my God, i never reviewed this story! yeesh, i'm so bad! i started reading this on yours and Meimi's website (go Tarnished Wings!) a long time ago before finding it here on ff.net and the review i *actually* did type, got erased. STUPID ff.net! anyway, i love this story and everyone just seems *so* real. it's really amazing actually, and i love Savali. he's so cool mischievous! and you know it takes a lot for me to actually like a character i've never seen before! ^.~ so bravo on that and bless you for the nice long chap! gotta pray for more!

Nice, and' I'd love to read more. The samd girl,eh?

This chapter was so good. *claps* I've always loved how things come back to haunt Ken. Poor Ken. It makes you want to write angsty fics about him. :D

And the next chapter is called "The Hanged Man?" Interesting. Doesn't that card have to do with gaining knowledge? Sounds a lot like the time when Odin hung himself on the World Tree to gain knowledge. Quite intriguing...

That was really cool!!
"Bloody brilliant", to quote someone that I don't even know...

I finally have time to review.

I love what you're doing to dearest Ken: certain aspects of his life come back to haunt him. "Life isn't fair." An interesting thing to point out that I'm sure you thought of, every time a person said that, Ken lost him/her. *gasps* What are you going to do to Takeru!

Another lovely chapter. I'm greatly looking forward to what you have planned... and the foreshadowing is just too good for words.