Katara!
No offense but I loathe Zutara!!

Katara

It's obviously Mai o.o Katara can't use throwing knives, nor is she able to repress her emotions. Poor, crazy Mai. o_o

This is a most excellent story...

i LURV this story! i think that mai is just emo enough to take her own life, but i also think she's vindictive enough to take katara's life. maybe it's a murder/suicide?

Not badly written in the least! The emotion is captivating and the structure is flawless (as for as can tell). Nothing is wrong with it short of leaving an h off of his in the third to last paragraph.

All in all, a 5/5 story!


In Christ,
ZFF

Finally I got a chance to read this... Anyway, awesome story, as usual. I don't really like Mai, but you wrote her POV realistically and brilliantly. I especially liked how she broke down crying, and then vowed to remain emotionless and impassive as she always had from that day... Very Mai thing to do. The ending was great, and left a chill running down my spine... Wow, Mai's gone a little nuts if she wants to kill Katara... It IS Katara, isn't it? Not Jin or Song or (le gasp) Toph?

Kidding. I know you too well to know you wouldn't do a blasphemous thing like that... Right?

It's great! I can't wait to read more.

Beautifully written story!
so I'm suppoused to decide? um well I would say Mai! but it's your story and you've done so well, it wouldn't matter to me
great job! ;)