ugh, NO! It's unfinished! This was awesome, I was loving it! I really hope you get the inspiration to keep writing and finish this story, I was really hooked.

Ahh! You didn't finish? You were on such a roll! I miss this show :(

Please, Please, Please update. This is so good!

cool wat happens next

That was great I could so see this as an episode of the show if lifetime stops trying to ruin my life and bring it back I hope thats not the end I can't wait for whats next

Fabulous!! Great tension and flow. I didn't realize that I had hit the end. I need more! Thank you for taking the time to writ4e for us.

Awasome

Oh no! Poor Henry. And the girls that are dying, too. I hope that a solution can be found soon, 'cause Henry's willpower can only last so long. Don't hold me in suspense, write more soon!

Oh, it's back in motion! Yay! And getting very interesting too. Poor Henry!

Fantastic chapter! 'Loved chapter6, too, very funny towards the end! But the last was even better, poor Henry - feeling guilty for those girls, unable to feed. 'Hope Vicki manages to help him. 'Enjoyed their exchange a lot, btw - so true to their characters! Update soon, please!

Aww, poor Henry feels responsible for those girls deaths. Is he? I know he wouldn't do it on purpose but could the ritual they performed have done something? It's great that Vicki is determined to help him through it. I loved their conversation at the end.

please continue!

I am so glad to see a new chapter of this story! Seems to have been a while, but the new chapter makes up for the wait! Henry's all angsty (did I spell that right?) and Coreen and Vicky are a bit of comic relief. By the way, do we get to learn what the "mystic pretzel" is?

Great job! More soon!

Excellent! And me being a lover of the funny, loved the Oktoberfest line! Good pacing, plot. Thanks for sharing.