This was an excellent story- you really captured the characters well!

Good wrap up. Fine piece of work start to finish. Thank you.

Good stuff. The part about the caretaker needing to recover is so dead on. Been there, done that. That part doesn't make it into much fiction. Great writing still. Thank you.

Okay, she's getting better...but is he? Time will tell. Great writing! Thank you!

Very effective and accurate description of a detox you've got going here. Any chance you're in the medical profession, maybe?

Damn, this is good! So much for getting to sleep tonight. Oh well, read on...

Wow! Yeah, that's gonna advance the relationship a bit. nothing like having to watch someone you care about unwillingly trip thru the worst parts of their subconscious, to bring you closer.

Okay.. I'm hooked...

Loved it! You write so well!

Great! Thanks for sharing. Linda

What an amazingly wonderful story! I loved every bit of it! I was on the edge of my seat throughout the entire story. I especially enjoyed how you described the care and love that Lee and Amanda had for each other. Thank you so much for writing such a great fanfic. I can't wait to read more from you. Thank you, thank you, thank you! :)

It's a very nice story !

I hope to read more...

Great story. What happens now? Will Amanda be tricked into telling their relationship? Please update soon!

Wow, this is awesome. I read it straight through in one sitting-couldn't seem to stop reading it. You write extremely well and I'm hoping for more stories soon.